Date: October 24 2020 6:37 AM Title: TGIF
The story is incredible !!! I would like to see a loving relationship between Kerry and his younger brother, as happened with Ashley in the story "losing control". I really like these two characters. A turnaround involving Kerri's mother would be interesting. I love twists, .. Finally I found the writer who likes to write many chapters d84;a039;d84;a039; a rarity nowadays.
Date: September 20 2020 7:29 PM Title: TGIF
I'm really enjoy this story but you haven't add to in in a couple months. Do you have any plans to continue it in the future?
Date: September 06 2020 7:46 PM Title: Rule Breaker
When I first started reading this I thought it was going to be really lack luster and not a lot of content, but to my surprise it had so much to offer. Really look forward to seeing you update this story sometime in the near future.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2020 5:41 PM Title: TGIF
Yes! Weekend time is here! I’m really excited to see what Alyssa plans with Zack.
I liked the scene where his fiends asked him about his plans and the girls were announcing that Zack is basically a toy for Alyssa the whole weekend! I’m glad she is taking him home with her and not limiting her punishments to school session. Now we get a compete weekend of fun with Alyssa and Zack. If he thought detention was long, it just got worse. ;)
I also enjoyed how his friends tried to cheer him up by saying how how Ms. Crowell is. I’d probably say the same thing if I was his friend. Actually, I’d disguise myself as Zack and take his place. ;)
I love the Camilla scenes right before Alyssa shows up. (Why is Alyssa always late? Lol). Anyway, the way Camilla was just crushing Adam’s groin with her foot was amazing. And Adam took it like a champ.
In addition, Camilla is thinking what some of us are thinking, and Alyssa is saying what you are thinking. Camilla wants to trade Adam for Zack and Alyssa is saying, not yet. Creative way to answer our suggestions. Nice.
Sometimes I imagine something like Spring break to occur, and Alyssa takes Zack and Adam home with her. And during this time, she basically tells Zack to watch and uses Adam in every way possible just to scare Zack. I could even imagine Alyssa sticking Adam inside her for the night and then she tells Zack that Adam was just put to bed. Zack would be in complete shock while I would be in complete joy. Haha!
Looks like the fun is about to begin this weekend. I wonder if her bedroom is kinky. Maybe Alyssa will use tape, string, floss, rubber bands, to restrain Zack and prevent him from escaping. Mmhmm, so many possibilities!
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: April 28 2020 10:55 AM Title: TGIF
Love it so far! Do you think there will be any vaginal stuff with Alyssa and Zack?
Author's Response: Yes, that’s coming up next!
[Report This]Date: April 23 2020 3:55 PM Title: Rule Breaker
Very much enjoying this. I really like both Alyssa and Camilla, I like the chapters where both of them get screentime, but my favorite would have to be Kerri. I really hope she gets to shrink Jack down, the chapter where he gets teased with the prospect of being her ass toy for the rest of his life was genius.
Author's Response: Good to know, I don’t know if we’ll be seeing much of Kerry and her family but we’ll see what happens. Thanks for reading!!!
[Report This]Date: April 23 2020 12:27 PM Title: Detention Sucks
I think the focus change fron Alyssa to Camilla is a nice thing. I think Camilla is a pretty good giantess and I'm looking foward to when she will have her own shrink ray ready so she can do even more.
Thank you for writing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I appreciate the support!
Date: April 23 2020 7:36 AM Title: Rule Breaker
One of my favorite stories on the site right now, the one I most look forward to seeing updated. Might have to reread through it all today. All around good content, especially pleased with the ass play.
I think I like Camilla focus better, as she’s playful and bullying, whereas Alyssa is more stern. Would love to see Camilla / Zack, or even Kerri / Zack if we somehow go back to Kerri’s dark (back)side. Thanks for the story!
Author's Response: I appreciate the review! It seems like asking which giantess people preferred was a bit of a waste, since each giantess has a fan club haha. Oh well, I guess it just means I’ll have to keep everyone’s storylines going. Hopefully I can write something that makes as many people happy as possible. Time will tell. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: April 23 2020 1:12 AM Title: Detention Sucks
I'd vote for focusing on Ms. Crowell and her butt.
[Report This]Date: April 22 2020 11:07 PM Title: Rule Breaker
I LOVE your writing! And it's impressive to see how many words you've managed to pump out on this epic story! Also, I've been trying to insert images on my own stories on this site but can't for the life of me figure out how. Show's the level of my computer literacy lol. Could you let me in on how you inserted that wonderful artwork on your description?
Author's Response: Haha don’t worry, I have a background in computer science and it still took me an embarrassing amount of time to figure how to do it. So make sure the image is accessible online somewhere. For instance I tweeted my picture so that I could right click the image and open it in a new window. Once you have the image in its own window, copy the URL. When you are posting your story you should see a button that says insert image in the dialogue box (next to all the formatting stuff). Paste the URL into the pop up window and you’re good to go. Thanks for reading and for the kind review, it is very much appreciated!
[Report This]Date: April 22 2020 10:54 PM Title: Detention Sucks
Wow, back to back chapters! Did not expect that, but I’m glad. The more the merrier and more fun to read.
Love the progression on how Zack is handling his detention. He was shocked at first and is reluctantly, but slowly obeying Alyssa as each day goes on.
I also like how Zack is enjoying every part of Ms. Crowell so far. Feet, butt and now her mouth. If she decides to be naughty and play with Zack in some other places, I would trade my own life to be in his position.
Even when Zack’s friend Nate showed up, and Alyssa asked him if he wanted to join Zack, I would have said yes. Alyssa’s dominance not just in her methods of torture, but also how she addresses her students makes her extremely sexy.
One thing I want to point out about Camilla is that I like how she just shows up randomly and messes with Zack. She even suggested trading Adam for Zack, which I think is actually not bad of an idea in the future. For me, it’s not the Camilla/Zack combo that enthralls me, but rather this leaves poor Adam back at the mercy of Alyssa. Alyssa and Adam are so different in the dominant/submissive dynamic that I believe Alyssa could convince him to be her personal toy forever.
Right now, it seems that Alyssa is enjoying a little fight in her pets and Zack is fighting a losing battle. Meanwhile, Camilla has Adam wrapped around her finger and basically making him her slave. Camilla knows how to use Adam as well.
As for which giantess I prefer; I think you already know that I love Alyssa. Ever since she sat on Adam in the first chapter, I have been waiting for her to make that comeback in this story. Camilla and Kerri took over early on and I kinda enjoyed their chapters as well. But there was always something about the way Ms. Crowell portrayed her dominance that I so craved in the beginning that led me back to wanting more of her. The previous chapter, she resumed her tormenting and I’m glad you say she is just getting started.
You did mention that you might take some of my previous suggestions into account so I’m always looking forward to that. You already do such an amazing job writing these characters and you even gotten me to fall in love with this sensual and dominant teacher. Sometimes I wish I had Alyssa as my teacher. I’d be in detention for the whole year!
I think you should write about whichever character you enjoy the most. I don’t mind if you write about Camilla or Kerri, but since you asked for an opinion, I have to once again go with Alyssa. She is my favorite character and I’d love to see more of her.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hmmmmm the issue with an Alyssa/Adam combo is that Camilla is very protective of her little plaything. It would take a hell of a confrontation to get her to give him up. Maybe we’ll see some giantess conflict in the future. But for now you can rest assured that Alyssa will remain a central character. As always my friend thanks so much for reading and for the substantial reviews!
[Report This]Date: April 22 2020 9:32 PM Title: Detention Sucks
My vote is definitely for Camilla. Her gym torture setup and followthrough has been my favorite part of the story so far. Can't wait to hear more about her swampy ass.
Author's Response: Good to know! I know I love a nice giantess gym scene haha. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: April 22 2020 8:48 PM Title: Rule Breaker
This is 100% a great story, and I can see that a lot of thought went into it. I would hope to see a sort of continuation of the Kerri redemption arc, where she finally brings justice to Camilla and Alyssa. Kerri is my favorite giantess out of the three and I definitely hope to see more of her.
Author's Response: Hmmmm Kerri you say? Not sure how she would bring them to justice, but I’ll keep her in mind as things progress. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: April 22 2020 7:25 PM Title: Detention Sucks
I would like to see where Camilla is going with her unhealth fixation and bullying. I am impressed by how you can manage several characters story lines at once, maybe Zack and Adam will figure out a way to help each other in the future...
Thanks for all the hard work.
Author's Response: Hmmm a tiny tag team? Sounds interesting, I like it :) As always I appreciate the kind words. Thanks for the support!
Date: April 20 2020 6:38 PM Title: Rule Breaker
Wow. You are such a talented writer. I was only planning on reading a few chapters but I just couldn't stop until I got all the way through. The characters you've created and the world seem so alive. I love the dynamic Camilla has with all the other students/teachers and the psychological games she plays with each of them. I had so much fun reading through this, I hope you keep surprising us with more amazing chapters soon!
Also if you give Camilla a chapter focusing on Adam (or someone else) inside her shoes/socks, you would be my hero. I don't think we got to see enough of her torturing tinies under her feet. ;D
Author's Response: Wow, read the whole thing in one sitting? I’m flattered that you’ve enjoyed it so much. I think I can manage a nice in-shoe chapter. Stay tuned and I’ll make it happen. Thanks so much for reading!!!
[Report This]Date: April 09 2020 3:02 AM Title: First Day Jitters
Wow! This is one of the best dialogue-filled chapters you have had in a while.
I mean, we had a little bit of everything. We had Zack messed with by Camilla in class, then Ms. Crowell announcing Zacks’s detention to the whole class, then I love how you skipped the rest of class, I mean, we all just wanted to see what happens after school, so I loved that. Then we had Camilla pretend it was her in charge of Zack, and then we see Adam show up like it’s routine and then Ms. Crowell finally shrinks Zack! And this is all in one chapter!
But let’s break it down. First we got Zack contemplating his future knowing that his dad can’t save him anymore. The guy may be powerful, but Ms. Crowell always gets her way. Zack being a jock probably always got his way too, but now he knows that size that used to be his strength will be gone.
Then Camilla shows up, and she knows that because of her letting Zack cheat and then changing her answers led him to get caught and therefore shrunk meaning that Camilla basically set him up for this. I love it!
Then we get Adam showing up and he just casually gives Camilla the work he did for her and the best part is that we see this from Zack’s perspective which shows how powerful Camilla truly is.
For the last part of the class scene, we got Ms. Crowell showing up and the first thing she does is announce Zack’s detention to the class. You know she is looking forward to it and she also wants Zack to be nervous about it all day. Even the fear of detention is growing in his mind as Alyssa announces it.
Then we move onto after school and Zack enters Alyssa’s room and sees Camilla there. At first I believed her when she said that she was the one going to take Zack instead. It’s stuff like this that made Michael and Adam submit to her earlier but Zack didn’t fall for it.
Then we see Camilla reveal why she is truly there and it’s to take Adam with her. This made me realize that I wish I was in this class too. I would have joined Camilla and waited for Ms. Crowell too so I could see Alyssa shrink and torment Zack. It’s like a free giantess show. I’m imagining Alyssa toy with Zack and then I get aroused and then she catches me with a boner and she decides to shrink me next. Oh boy, that would be awesome and scary at the same time!
Then Adam shows up and he doesn’t even complain nor argue with Camilla. He sits behind her and smells her farts and let’s her toy with him. I even loved the tactic of Camilla getting Zack to smell her shoe to prevent Adam from Camilla’s torture. It was clever. If I was Zack, I wouldn’t have done it because I kinda like Adam being sexually tormented by Camilla. (Man, I guess I’m messed up. Lol.)
Then we get to the best part and it’s Ms. Crowell, aka Alyssa stealing the show once again, showing Camilla who is the boss and keeping the remote for herself. Alyssa shrinks Adam and let’s Camilla take him as if it’s a daily thing, which is kinda hot, and finally we get to what I’ve been waiting for a while now.
We get Zack shrinking and Ms. Crowell is ready for some fun. Alyssa has this way of words that make her dominant, yet sexual, and I love how you chose these words for her. It makes her seem so powerful and sexy! The “I am going to enjoy this” was perfect. You could tell she loves this and it was all because she was able to convince the mayor that his son cheated and made her shrinking solution a viable tactic. And it looks like she is going to start with her sexy foot, and hopefully after that, she will move him up to her intimate body parts.
Part of me was hoping the “Camilla taking Zack part” was true so that way we could get Alyssa to toy with Adam again. Adam seems so compliment that I bet Alyssa could turn Adam into the perfect tiny pet for her. Zack will put up more of a fight so maybe Alyssa wants to see the transition of Zack being a rebel to Zack being obedient eventually. Either way, I’m glad Alyssa has a tiny in her control again. Maybe Camilla and Alyssa will switch tinies. Hehe. That could be fun.
I can’t wait for the next chapter! (Also, happy 50th review!)
Author's Response:
Hello again! And thank you for review #50! WOOO! I'm glad that people are enjoying the chapter's that aren't pure smut, becuase even though thats why we're all here, it's nice to set the scene every now and then. I'm sorry for the delay in uploads, but I'm just having a hard time writing something that I'm happy with. Hopefully I'll get things back on track soon, but rest assured, I'll continue working on this story no matter what. It might just take a while. As always thank you so much for your continued support. It means so much to me that you're enjoying the story and that you take the time to leave your reviews. Stay tuned for more!!!
P.S. the upcoming Weekend with Alyssa chapter is catered to some of the requests you've made previously. We'll see her experimenting with the different size options that the remote has :)
[Report This]Date: April 08 2020 11:36 PM Title: Rule Breaker
I am LOVING this story! One of my favorite things is when a girl teases a soon-to-be-shrunk boy with what will happen to him and you are a master at the tease. And as if that isn't enough you post new chapters regularly and have great tastes! I was on the fence before, but I'd honestly have to say you might just be my favorite writer on the site, keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Well I appreciate the high praise, because there are some seriously talented folks on this site, so thank you! And I hope i havent dissappointed too much with my recently sparse upload schedule. I'm just having a hard time sitting down and doing any writing. The other day I sat and stared at a blank screen for about 40 minutes before giving up and going to do something else. I know I'll get back into the swing of things, I just need to get out of this quarantine funk.
And one of my absolute favorite things in a ginatess story is when the giantess teases her prey before they're even shrunken down. It seems like it just makes the actual payoff even more enjoyable. Glad to hear that it's enjoyed by others as well :) Thanks so much for the support!
[Report This]Date: April 08 2020 8:24 PM Title: First Day Jitters
Thanks for continuing to add! I look forward to your chapters more than any other story right now.
Would love to hear how bad it is in the back of Camilla's panties after gym class.
Author's Response:
Oh it's bad... real bad :) And don't worry, Camilla will be back in the spotlight before too long and I can promise there's some swampy times ahead for our tiny heroes.
Thanks for reading!!!
[Report This]Date: April 08 2020 6:28 PM Title: First Day Jitters
In a similar boat with the quarantine and lack of motivation. Do what makes you feel better during this time, even if it’s not writing. We’ll be here when you do though! :D
As always, another great buildup chapter. Can’t wait to see what Camilla has planned for Zack, wonder if it’ll make Michael’s treatment look tame by comparison.
Author's Response:
It's definitely unfortunate, because I typically enjoy writing very much. I just feel like being cooped up inside has put a damper on my mood and thus all of the things that typically make me happy. Making a concentrated effort to go outside more, even if its just taking a walk around the block. Hopefully it'll help me get out of this weird headspace. I appreciate everyone's support on the story. If the community wasnt so kind, I'd likely have given up a while ago.
And I'm going to try out expanding the characters in thisa story so we've got a little bit of diversity in our cast. Hopefully it pans out! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: April 05 2020 1:14 PM Title: Contractual Obligations
Oh oh, somebody is going to get it I fear.
Well, that means poor Adam hopefully can get a bit of a break
now that the focus is elsewhere.
Than you for writing!
Author's Response: Yes, we’re headed into the Giantess Ms. Crowel arc of the story. So Michael should be getting a little breather for a bit :). Thanks for reading!!