Date: March 18 2021 3:27 PM Title: Changes Afoot
Beautiful story, i wish he would continue to submit to her daughters
[Report This]Date: March 17 2021 7:40 AM Title: Changes Afoot
"The ceiling was lower."
Shouldn't that ne "The ceiling was higher"?.
Date: March 08 2021 7:42 PM Title: Absolute Power
hey i remember this story, there were parts of it that gave me inspiration for my own! hope you enjoy writing again :)
Author's Response:
Thanks Jess, hopefully get back into the swing of things - in awe of those who manage to write such long content but am going to try and make future chapters more substantial. Love your writing :)
Date: May 05 2020 6:56 AM Title: Changes Afoot
Love this story so far its my favorite scenario. Been trying to review all week but for some reason couldn't log in and had to set up new account. I love where the story is going and hope it continues. I think a cool twist would be mom and the girls planning a trip and getting grandma (dads mom) to baby sit for the weekend. Would love to see a BBW grandma. Keep up the good work.
Date: May 04 2020 6:22 AM Title: Poppy's Turn
Loved his talking to Sophia. I'm sure it gives him confidence. Poppy being in control was interesting. She's so much stronger than him. The bath wasn't a good idea. Now he's only 2 feet tall. It will only get worse for him. I can only imagine his looking up at Sophia now. She will be a Goddess in high heels. Will Sophia spank him across her knees? I hope so. Really enjoying your writing. Well done.
Date: April 30 2020 7:43 PM Title: Day with Clara
Will Sophia start treating him more like a child? Will She put him across her lap and spank him?
Date: April 30 2020 7:40 PM Title: Day with Clara
Interesting. I would have preferred a non family member babysitter. Cool ideas though.
Date: April 30 2020 7:35 PM Title: Pleasure and Pain
Loved Sophia calling him, little man. Love her in control, telling him where he's allowed to go.
Date: April 30 2020 7:30 PM Title: Back to Work
Emily was fabulous. Scary good. I'm sure she can provide a dollhouse or an aquarium for him to live in.
Date: April 30 2020 7:25 PM Title: Realisation
Love Sophia. Would have preferred a lady doctor.
Date: April 30 2020 7:22 PM Title: Changes Afoot
Loved the coin setting. Nice start.
[Report This]Date: April 30 2020 2:21 PM Title: Changes Afoot
While I am a big fan of a husband/father shrinking losing his standing with the family. I think you are going to fast with the change around. At two feet shorter then his daughter, while Im sure she would act differently around her smaller dad, I still think she would see him as person and not a little toy to treat as her foot slave. Or if she was going to punish him (to show that he needs his family) I think it jumping the gun to go straight into sexual punishments like that.
Look foward to see what you do with future chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback - think it's brought on by a need to keep the story moving and exciting. Probably should have had him shrinking quicker in that case, which might happen from now on. I don't intend there to be any let up from here, with things getting increasingly humiliating for Harry...
[Report This]Date: April 30 2020 10:19 AM Title: Day with Clara
I'm liking how things are progressing. If Harry's family is already torturing him like this I can just imagine what they'll do when he gets smaller. Something tells me his complaints to his wife about the day's events are going to fall on deaf ears.
Date: April 30 2020 9:56 AM Title: Changes Afoot
Love it. Too bad the 16 didn't get a lil curious sexually. Love mom n daughter to notice he is fascinated with how big they look n how big their breasts r now to him
Date: April 29 2020 11:56 AM Title: Pleasure and Pain
Awesome story! Very excited for the next chapter. I'm hoping he gets really tiny. It would also be great to see some bare footplay. Thanks for sharing!
[Report This]Date: April 28 2020 6:13 PM Title: Changes Afoot
Great story! Really enjoying it so far. At this point it seems like it's a question of which giantess will get ahold of Harry first. We've seen how his daugthers and Emily will probably respond to his situation but we haven't heard much from his wife. It'll be interesting to see how she sees him as he starts to shrink even more. It's always fun to see how different authors address the husband-wife dynamic in these kind of stories.
Looking forward to more!
Date: April 28 2020 7:30 AM Title: Changes Afoot
Good start! do not rush: make it slow ;-)
[Report This]Date: April 28 2020 5:47 AM Title: Realisation
It was a good start! I hope you can continue with the story.
Date: April 27 2020 5:25 PM Title: Changes Afoot
Hey just read this chapter and I’m always glad to see some new people trying their hand at writing on this forum! I also really loved the concept you have going here and it looks like it has a great start with a lot of promising characters. I hope you continue to follow through with the story and we see many more chapters to come from you :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment - fingers crossed it comes together and you enjoy. Just a bit of scene setting at the moment, before we get into the interesting stuff.