Reviews For Her Chocolate Bar
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Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2022 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm hoping there is infact life after humanity on earth.

and my one only desire… Beginning in my childhood… Does become granted as reality for me after all my life of waiting.

That I may indeed discover my ultimate Nirvana and salvation.

Given the honour of proving myself more than worthy to one girl's waiting buds of taste and enjoyment, nothing less than the best flavoured Chocolate bar that has existed in her craving life.

Reviewer: Milla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2022 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm not that much into transformation (not THAT much, I mean... lol), but this story is lovable to the core! Also, I do LOVE chocolates (and who doesn't!?)

If only some people I know ended up as chocolate bars like that teacher... I'd have no problem eating them all, savoring their chocolate bodies melting in my tongue, and licking my fingers clean afterwards.

JRamos, Her-Chocolatebar, IsabelChris, thank you for another excellent story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review Milla, it was a nice surprise!

this story was commissioned by her-chocolate-bar awhile back and you’re right, it is very nice. Unfortunately, or fortunately lol, I didn’t have any part on how well this story turned out so I’ll have to give all the credit to her-chocolate-bar and Isabel.

You're right, who doesn’t love chocolate. And girls are especially known for having a sweet tooth... being a chocolate bar would be like asking to be eaten instantly... lucky for us that’s not possible yet, right >.>

Anyhow, thank you again for leaving a review. I’m sure Isabel would have been super thrilled about having a likeminded girl enjoying her stories! Same goes for her-chocolate-bar. I wonder if he’s still around...

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2020 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hello Isabel.  I have news about Raroon. I gave you my em address. Would you like to see the news?

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2020 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

My hat!!! I'm so sorry I made that error, but, my friend, it was becausev you never replied...so I just assumed. That person in S.America WILL be so happy!

 

I do wish you jolly good health, and you may contact me at banfield18@blueyonder.co.uk if you will.  Please forgive me my error.

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2020 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

Unfortunately, Haroon, being blind, was about to have his heart-timer ?(or something?) readjusted, but he died. He was Australian. He used a vouce-mechanism to displayed his yarns, and to receive.

 

Tony 



Author's Response: Hey there tony? Just so you know? I'm not quite dead just yet! Lol. However... I have been battling some serious health problems all the same. Spending a grate deal of time stuck in hospital fighting a brain tumour. The pacemaker surgery I had some time ago… turned out successfully. Cheers.

Reviewer: SToorn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2020 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice story, well written 



Author's Response:

I'm sure Isabel would have been delighted to know another person appreciated her story, as I'm sure Haroon also does!

Reviewer: pete445 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 01 2020 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love transformation plots very good



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this. It was actually a very special gift... written for me specifically by a dear friend.

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