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Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2020 10:13 PM Title: Stay away from Sis

Super hot plot also the accidental vore was hot and how she just racted and his friend seeing swallowed and all.

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 30 2020 8:24 PM Title: Stay away from Sis

Loved the ending so much especially the “Okay, one more time.  Hey Tod, where’s Larry?” that was super hot. Who she literally didnt give a shit about Larry and was just forcing Tod kinda to forget Larry too, and hes mostly next having somg accident sooner orlater.

Reviewer: Astrogator Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 30 2020 7:41 PM Title: Tess

Excellent wordsmithing.  A vivid work of imagination!

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2020 10:12 PM Title: Willow

Well that chapter 7 was heartbreaking, and right after the sexy but differently heartbreaking chapter 6.  Here's hoping some sort of silver lining happens to poor Willow, like maybe an owner who collects shrinkies or volunteer rescue worker?  Every now and then some light needs to shine in the dark.

 

And as for Ryan and Emily, I took a certain grim joy in watching her break down, like she put Ryan through all that torment with her absentmindedness and here is the result.  Still, it's good that she cared enough to weep for him.  I wonder if this isn't the last we've seen of Ryan.  Maybe he's tougher, or luckier, than previously thought?  Your stories have grim and brutal setting but also have a 'happy ending' of sorts.  The kind that end on a 'you thought it was over didn't you?' sort of ending.

 

Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2020 5:54 PM Title: Willow

For my taste it wasnt even dark at all compared to you usual plots. I am a huge fan of your cruel and dark stories so that is totally a plus from my side 😈

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2020 1:26 AM Title: Willow

Well this chapter is heartbreaking. A young daughter with decades ahead of her vs a dog probably half-way through his years. Sister is a monster, mom is the opposite of a loving mother, and dad has the willpower of a potato. No future for Willow in that home, her only real chance is meeting older, wild shrinkers. I wonder why society just doesn't establish communities for the shrinkism victims. It's an entire workforce that can be productive with miniturized manufacturing and internet offices. And now that it's mutated and is starting to effect adults the percentage of the normal population will only continue to decline since decent people with morality are an oddity in this setting. Is it really so expensive to convert small warehouses into cities of millions that consume less food and energy then normal apartment complexes?

Reviewer: khaladhen Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2020 10:31 PM Title: Willow

Wow, that wasn't heartbreaking at all! *cry!*

Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2020 6:38 PM Title: Willow

Great stories, have to agree with the others last one was a little dark hope she at least finds a decent home and the family ends up getting bad karma.

Keep up the great writing.

Reviewer: Kai777 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2020 5:25 PM Title: Willow

Damn..... i come here for sexual story not emotional story.

I lost my erection ....

Lol...

Reviewer: araval Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2020 5:06 PM Title: Willow

I really like many of your stories but man this one was dark.

It was well written but for me it was to dark and sad.

 

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2020 3:22 PM Title: Willow

Well damn. 

That ending was rough! Like Ow!

Nina is a bitch, duke should be put down, and Willow's parents are assholes. 

Willow needs a hug. 

You wrote this really well, and I freaking hate Willow's family. 

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2020 2:16 PM Title: Ryan's day at school (part 2)

The entireplot with Rick was really hot and mean, loved it.

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2020 2:14 PM Title: Ryan's day at school (part 3)

Cannot say how mch I loved this chapter and the entiire idea would love to see something like this again. I could see some cruel teenage boy maybe recording stuff like that with shrunken people selling it online or something. I also loved the entire Plot twist with Rick so mean and hot!! also the condom part was hot.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2020 3:28 AM Title: Ryan's day at school (part 3)

Great stuff

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2020 10:40 PM Title: Ryan's day at school (part 3)

Really enjoyed the idea with the unaware filming and posting it at some porn size with the toilet arc, that could be used for a standalone story too. Really liked this chapter a lot!!

Reviewer: Reidthemouseboy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2020 11:54 PM Title: The Breakup Party

You know this makes me curious what would have happened if he picked Beth instead. Would we get a cuter happy ending or what

Reviewer: Applebottomj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 02 2020 10:31 PM Title: A Day at Abby's Shop

I love chapter 4, would love it see it continued or another story of a similar concept. Being shrunk and bound/sewed to the back of a pair of panties is one of my favorite concepts.

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2020 6:38 PM Title: A Day at Abby's Shop

Enjoying these little side stories a lot to be honest was a nice idea to tell plots from this universe in side stories!!!

Reviewer: Northgate Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2020 7:20 PM Title: A Day at Abby's Shop

Loved this story with all the toys being demonstrated.  The only comment is that I would have preferred that Abby kept Jason in her panties for a week rather than her boyfriend's chastity belt.  BTW, what guy names Spike would wear a chastity belt with a tiny guy inside no matter how hot his girlfriend is!

Everytime I read your stuff, I want to write a Ryan and Tess chapter.  Since she knows him and likes him, she'd be careful not to kill him because he'd be her special shrinkee.  Just let me know !

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2020 5:14 PM Title: A Day at Abby's Shop

Great read.  Looking forward to more chapters.

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