Reviewer: DrTritium Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2020 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 4

I like this story. This is one of my favourite devices - a giantess and tiny who are on gentle-ish terms but where cruelty is still involved outside the relationship. Very dominating dynamic. I like it. 

Your characters have great dynamics. But I think your storytelling would improve if you extended your descriptions of events out. There's references to things that sound interesing but not a full description. I think this would help bring your story to life.