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Reviewer: angelus288 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2020 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another story so soon? Awesome. I also like the historical nature of the story. Any chance you might do another historical one like maybe in Ancient Rome, Greece, Persia or Egypt? 

Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2020 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well this was a succinct and exquisitely written tale of epic terror. You put so much time love and care into carefully crafting your playthings only to destroy them in a flash of brilliance that's awesome to behold! I enjoyed Antonio's thoughts and feelings with regard to the slaughter till the bitter end. Bravo! 

Also, thanks for that list in response to my earlier review. I'll be sure to check those out. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I was absolutely one of those people to finish making a big fancy Lego or building block construction and then have some monster knock it all down. Makes the end more impactful I find if there is some context for why its impactful. Hope you enjoy the other stuff as well!

Reviewer: Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2020 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Gosh, another story so soon? You really spoil us~ once again another lovely work. Generally enjoyed just the general idea of big girls being big, especially in a lovely historical context like this. If only that's how wars were actually fought! Thank you again!

-Jess



Author's Response:

Wars would be over pretty quick if it was one girl being huge haha. Thanks for the kind words.

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