Date: September 18 2020 5:51 PM Title: Refreshments and Pest Control
Ok. I'm commenting on the second chapter. I enjoyed the first chapter but the second was a complete mess. According the the writer the chapter was written by someone else and then edited by them. Their are a number of incosistencies. The daughter is swimming instead of walking on the water. They all of a sudden have radios instead of cell phones. The others, who didn't know where the kids went, all of sudden know katie was swallowed and want to rescue her. Then they talk about meeting up with carl, but don't know he was crushed under the giant foot, even though the giant voices were talking about crushing a bug and supposeldy all insects have been cleared from the home. I really hope the rest of the chapters are more consistent and as well written as the first.