[Report This]Date: October 27 2020 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 14: Foreign Game
Great story. I like it when more people grow bigger. Does Phillip get smaller at all? Mulan is a great character. I hope that some more stuff happens with her. For another character, I can't give an full opinion yet. if he ends up with Judith, either he gets into the hands of author who visits or Judith meets with other moms and he is in the hands of hot milf situation. if it is Lily, A neighbor finds him, maybe one of the kids, or she meets a new person.
Either way great story keep up the work
Author's Response:
Thank you for your input. you have to wait and see what happens with Phillip. Thank you for your honest opinion about a new character. I listen to input and put it into the story. if it goes in one of those situation I will try to use those characters designs.