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Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2020 7:09 AM Title: Loophole

She throws her shoe in the trash but then she makes it sound like she is going to change her back before end of the trip.  So is she just gonna run around after with only one shoe.   Lol

Still it was a very good short story.  Look forward to reading others



Author's Response:

LOL yeah i realized that as i was writing it but didnt think anyone would care enough to call it out. i figured if she has the power to turn a human being into a shoe though then she'll definitely have the power to just turn some other random item into a shoe at the end of the day

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2020 4:02 PM Title: Loophole

Great stuff! Eagerly await more!



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2020 12:38 PM Title: Loophole

Great first chapter. Really looking forward for a bunch of one offs from you



Author's Response:

got a few more planned!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2020 7:26 AM Title: Loophole

I already cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

thanks!

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