Reviews For Ascending
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Reviewer: MatrixSimon Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2021 7:30 PM Title: Starting Out

I just love the Powers they have! Thanks for making this!

Reviewer: Avid Reader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2021 12:11 PM Title: Breaking Boundaries

"Her proposal made sense in her head,[...]"

I learned the words "pliant" & "cowed" from this.

It got rare that I get vocables this way, but it happens every once in a while.

 

I really have to commend you on the Vore Scene focusing on the act of swallowing itself is very rare. Granted, if you have no superpowered throat muscles it's probably not that interesting.

Concerning their talk beneath the overpass: So Thalia's horror at the beginning of the chapter wasn't about the caused problems at all. It was that she would not be the one exerting the power.

My favorite part was suprisingly Thalia dismantling the Cops while being normal-sized - that drove the power home more thoroughly.

 

I came across a weird "coindicence" concerning the title of the story. There is another "Ascending" on your author page. Granted, that one was finished in 2010, so the risk of confusion is probably low.

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2020 6:03 AM Title: Starting Out

Great start.. Lots of potential with superpowered sometimes giantesses.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2020 1:45 PM Title: Starting Out

Great story and descriptions! I really hope the girls get MUCH bigger! It would also be fun to see Sophie get her hands on the growth chemical and grow making this a HUGE rivalry! 

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