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Summary:


Traversing across the empty expanse of space, a lonely and somewhat obsessive goddess sets off to an intergalactic journey to find her soul mate. The giantess will do anything to get with her one true love,  from pampering, world domination to otherworldly fun. Will the two of them last?

A small tale of a gigantic goddess and normal sized human in their exploration of love on whether If such a strange relationship can truly stay afloat.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.

Reviews and Feedback are greatly appreciated!


FINISHED STORY


Rated: X
Categories: Giantess, Breasts, Body Exploration, Couples, Destruction, Entrapment, Fantasy, Feet, Gentle, Insertion, Maternal, Mouth Play, Odor, Unaware, Vore Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Mega (501 ft. to 5279 ft.), Tera (101 mi and up), Titan (101 ft. to 500 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Challenges: None
Series: Goddess' Galactopia
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Word count: 43827 Read: 74442
Published: January 15 2022 Updated: July 20 2022
Story Notes:

First time writing. So yeah, keeping it quite tame right now but if this story expands then more tags may be added. And yeah, then it may become a bit less tame.


This is about a Giantess who is exploring the universe to find the man she loves, said man is chosen by destiny and is fated to serve his soon to be queen. As well as the adventures the two will go on as time progresses. 

Story starts with basic tags but am hoping to add more as it goes on. It won’t always be extreme size difference but will mostly be about that; although not always for the couple themselves.

My Grammar is also not perfect by any means. Still working on that too.

But regardless I would love having more feedback. And thanks for reading.

(side note: I’ve reached page 150 of this in pdf form. Wow.)

1. Chapter 1. A Pathetic Speck of Rock. by Edgedej4 [Reviews - 9] starstarstarstarhalf-star (1617 words)

First time I’ve written anything, This chapter is more introduction and information. Not too much of a specific tag happens here besides general giantess content.

2. Chapter 2- Some Playful Teasing by Edgedej4 [Reviews - 2] starstarhalf-star (1544 words)

So, I wanted this Chapter to be quite significantly longer. I'll go into more details as to what i wanted to cover but basically i decided to cut some stuff and leave it for the next chapter. I wasn't quite happy with some interactions, But Hopefully i can get that worked on by the next chapter. Again, writing is hard and this is my first story, My Grammar is most likely quite imperfect and could use some work, but leave some feedback anyway.

3. Chapter 3. Stressful Encounter by Edgedej4 [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (2452 words)

As I said last time, I had some difficulty with this one. I really need to pick a tense to stick with it. I’ve noticed I keep jumping between present and past. 

Anyway, feed back is appreciated.

{Gone back to this and have slightly edited it, it’s at least a small improvement I think.}

4. Chapter 4. One Sided Love by Edgedej4 [Reviews - 1] (2182 words)

This chapter displays our goddess's perspective on the meeting, quite a stark contrast to our male lead Blyke who was confused and scared. I attempted to stick to one tense and type of person (2nd person) and while it makes certain parts less confusing it does make it more difficult to write. Hopefully I'll improve as i continue. As always I am prone to grammatical errors and such, and Feedback is appreciated.

5. Chapter 5. Violena, The Slightly Obsessive Goddess. by Edgedej4 [Reviews - 3] (2675 words)

Wow, finally we are drawing near to the conclusion of the prologue. Again this is my first time writing about such content, and I think looking back it’s more painstakingly obvious I need to describe more and get a better feel for what to write in relation to stuff like insertion and such. 


Feedback is once again appreciated.

6. Chapter 6. The much Needed Conversation. by Edgedej4 [Reviews - 2] (2237 words)

Honestly wanted a more action heavy chapter, but I thought a talk would be quite good to have between our protagonists. So here it is, quite a exposition heavy chapter with dialogue. Not much typical giantess stuff, it’s a bit of a stretch but I guess you could call it in the gentle tag?


anyway, feed back is appreciated. My update schedule for this will begin to slow down after this chapter. So yeah.

7. Chapter 7. The Unaware Giantess’ Crusade. by Edgedej4 [Reviews - 0] (4920 words)

Slightly longer then usual chapter, There have been some more tags added that I thought I would do. Like Unaware and Vore. Now vore is something that’s not really done to heavily here, more unaware. 


Which speaking of which I’ve found out it is really difficult to write, so my personal complaint for myself this time is my lack of ability to describe a scene for unaware scenarios.


Anyway, I hope you all enjoy and leave a review.

8. Chapter 8: Humanity as Her Pets. by Edgedej4 [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstar (3685 words)

Chapter dedicated to focusing mainly on resolving the plot points of what Lena wanted to do with earth back from like chapter 2-3.   Basically finishing this mini arc.


My own personal compliant as usual for myself as that I need to work on my third person writing in specifically on how to make it interesting, if anyone has tips or any advice please do let me know via a review.

9. Chapter 8.5. A Small Break. by Edgedej4 [Reviews - 1] (1912 words)

Smaller then usual kind of mini chapter. Or a sub chapter is more accurate. I wanted to write this as a small extra to have for this point in the story. So enjoy. 


My usual compliant for myself is the lack of description I put, perhaps I need to go back to first or second person .

10. Chapter 9. The Home Date. by Edgedej4 [Reviews - 1] (3555 words)

More of a world building, characters and Story > Fetish chapter. I guess slow chapters near the beginning of a new arc or part are normal. Regardless this one is less extreme size stuff and more gentle stuff. I’ll be working on adding a new plot line soon.

As always my usual criticism for myself is I need to add more depth to the characters. I tried doing that here in this chapter, but by now they should really start having more. So I hope to improve on this front as we continue. 

11. Chapter 10. Merely a Snack. by Edgedej4 [Reviews - 2] starstarstarhalf-star (2178 words)

Another chapter, an interesting one where it’s more action focused. So we’re continuing the non extreme size relationship for now, and perhaps a couple more chapters… maybe. As I’ve said I want to explore a crueler side to the world of these godly figures like Lena.

My usual complaint this time around is that I need to pace out my description better. I think I’ve slowly improved in adding description itself but need to pace it out better. (Not describe irrelevant stuff).

As always. Feedback is heavily appreciated. 


12. Chapter 11. A Small Dispute. by Edgedej4 [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarhalf-star (2154 words)

Been a while, but back with another chapter. We’re slowly moving away from a more happy and chill home date arc back to a new thing now. Hope you all can enjoy.


My usual criticism for myself this time, more so descriptions on ‘crushing’ as it’s not something I’m used to really describing. If anyone has tips for that please do leave a review with feedback.

13. Chapter 12. Lena's Consideration by Edgedej4 [Reviews - 4] starstarstarstarstar (1903 words)

A bit more cruelty this time around. A bit more conflict within our female lead’s head.  Overall, I actually think I could of done this chapter a bit better, or rather for the quality that it is, finished it sooner. I apologise for that. 

For those interested, this chapter is less action focused.  Please do enjoy. 

14. Chapter 12.5 Blyke's Revival by Edgedej4 [Reviews - 0] (1394 words)

Been a while. Sorry for the delay with this chapter.  It's a .5 chapter too meaning its quite short but Still important. My criticism for this chapter for myself would be the lack of proper description on conveying emotions.

Still not much action yet, but it should happen soon. I will say going into this big I definitely needed a stronger chance plan on what should be covered and when.

15. Chapter 13. The Compromise. by Edgedej4 [Reviews - 0] (1874 words)

Finally, a compromise happens. Nothing too outlandish or crazy. But the awkward tension in the air is finally cut. 

And oh yeah, a tiny bit of action, at last, begins.

Enjoy! And Please do leave a review!

16. Chapter 14. Soul-mates Forever. by Edgedej4 [Reviews - 1] starstarstarstarstar (7545 words)

Final Chapter, sorry for the wait. 

(As usual, it might take a day or two to sort out some site specific formatting errors.)

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.