Great start although that part about tucking him in her panties was a bit on the edge.  I am hoping he gets to the big sister soon so we can have things get even more interesting.  Somehow I think meeting the big sister will be a case of "jumping from the frying pan into the fire" which will make it all the better.

Thanks and can't wait for Chapter 3.

Loved this story.  I like all of your F/m stories as theyare very similiar to many of my own ideas.  This one is particular was a nice short story with a good set up and ecellent ending.  Thanks for sharing.

I just found this story and read it for the first time and all I can say is excellent.  I'm a sucker for a good revenge story and tis had all the right elements.  I liked the fact that Mark kept thinking she might restore him to normal.  Just great pacing and story telling.  It was actually a very simple story told in a great way.  I expecially like the end when Mark realizes how truely screwed he is and what his ultimate fate will be.  Just awesome.  Thanks for sharing.

This is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories of all time.  The episodes with Amy are fastastic and have a lot of the same elements that I have written in my stories including ones I never published.  I am hoping Billy never gets out of Amy's clutches and she just keeps coming up with more fun and games for them to play.  Great work.  Please keep it up.

Regards,
North

Thanks for another great chapter in Ryan's saga.   I like that you advanced the story on two fronts with both Emily and Ryan.   I have to say I'd like to see Ryan lead the others to mount a rescue of Willow.  She will of course berate him for risking everyone but she'll appreciate what he did for her and he earns her respect and loyalty.   I would hate to see this be the end of Willow and us not finding out where she was leading the group.   Thanks for you hard work on this.  

Great story and I love how Ally is turning into the psycho girlfriend that will let nothing get between her and her little man.  I suppose breaking up with her isn't a option if he wants to live.  I suppose sooner or later, she'll want him to move into her house so her can be with her 24x7 and no one will get between them.  Can't wait to see a part 2.

Thank you for writing this.  It was a very nice job and I really enjoyed this chapter.  Love to see more of Tess    I had an idea for a chapter with her that follows the premise you set up here.  I'd be happy to write the story and post it if you don't mind me borrowing you Shrinkism universe and the Tess character.  If you prefer I don't mind submitting an outline for you to write.  Just let me know however you'd like to see it.  

Great story and I'm not a vore fan at all.  All the lead up was truely awesome.  Thanks for taking the time to write this.

Good story and I liked the premise.   It was a nice first night but it would be cool to see another chapter.  Maybe the can give the app another try and she'll keep him small for the weekend and try so other settings in the app.  

Great premise and story.  I really enjoyed it and I can't wait to find out what Allison whispered as well as Jim's fate.   I was thinking that Allison and Morgan would just have dinner and she wouldn't stop his shrinking to the next day when we has only a few inches tall but now with your chapter 2 ending who know what will happen.   Please post chapter 3 soon!    Thanks.