Reviewer: Idealworld Signed 
Date: May 07 2021
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Loved this story, and I love stories where sorority girls pick on younger guys, so this scenario was a godsend for me. You made me enjoy vore the way you write it, the passion and heat you get, the all the sensory stuff right. I love the characters as well; they all felt like real people, and that's hard to do when they're literally eating people. I love how the story diverges into subplots and the shifting perspective. I even loved your unbirthing scene, and I usually cringe at those. Amazing work, and you earned a new fan. The only complaint is why you have to do my boy Matthew like that. The least he could have gotten was a blowjob; only kidding, fantastic job.
Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah I think sororities are the perfect candidates for tormenting boys to balance out all the lusting teenage boys do over sororities~
I'm happy to hear all the characters felt so real to you. It's always a challenge having such a large cast, as most characters don't have much screentime so to speak. I was a little worried it'd be difficult to follow along who was who etc. I tried to split it up though so readers only had to remember one or two people each act.
And yeah poor Mathew lol. I thought it'd be such a dismissive way to treat him to have him eaten so swiftly, reinforcing the whole femdom angle of it. I'll be writing a few more F/M stories soon where preds take their time with their prey~
