Reviewer: kenrios Signed
Date: December 12 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Girl in the Yellow Frock

I personally would like Henry and Ada to be in different terms. Basically, if Henry wanted to be with Ada, it was of his own free will. Slavery, while pleasant for Henry at first, will begin to dent his soul in the long run and when Ada no longer wants it she will dispose of him as a piece of trash. At that point I would like Henry to have the opportunity to leave if he wanted to. But knowing Ada, I don't have many illusions. Maybe that's why I didn't like that Henry lost to Ada, but not everything can be the bed of roses in a story on this site, right? What I would like is for Henry at some point to start fighting for his freedom before it's too late. Personally, I would not like this character to have a tragic ending even if it brings him pleasure. He seems too good a person to end up like this. That would be too cruel. I believe that life is not something so trivial as to dismiss it like that.

Reviewer: kenrios Signed
Date: May 25 2022 Title: Chapter 11: Kin

Oh, wow. It's... wow, I'm speechless. I can't even imagine the amalgamation of emotions I felt when I read this chapter. Despite the way Alma expressed herself, something still made me feel sorry for her. It is that behind everything she said to her daughter, as you wrote Jack, there were traces of truth and simply Alma used these grains to plant the seeds of doubt and her twisted thoughts of her in her daughter. But I don't know, I felt sorry for Alma. Maybe it's because she pushes away the only person who could love her somehow I don't know... Wow, fantastic story. I didn't think you'd update it so soon Jack. And it seems that the long-awaited meeting between Bridget and Lexi is approaching. Another thing that surprised me... Jenna musical artist, seriously? Wow that introduces a personality trait of hers that she didn't know about. How mysterious is the soul of this character.

In short Jack keep it up. This Omega universe is really exciting and full of many good stories. Thanks for following this story, friend.

Author's Response: Alma may be evil by basically any standard, but she believes everything she says, and she knows how to manipulate people. And yes, while Jenna is intense, she has some complexity to her for sure. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: kenrios Signed
Date: May 07 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Advent

Wow, wow. I assumed that a meeting between Lexi and her mother would happen at some point in the story but I can't even imagine what Lexi would say to her mother after 12 years. Her mother taught her to carry out genocide against the Betas and Lexi was the victim of injustice because of one. Wow, that would kind of confirm in Alma's eyes what she told her daughter. And there are two fundamental facts, Alexandra's 'betrayal' of her mother and the fact that she has not visited in 12 years. Wow, I can't even imagine what those two would say except insults. We will see

Author's Response: It will most likely not be a lovey-dovey conversation

Reviewer: kenrios Signed
Date: December 18 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Haven

This month I have been reading the history of Inheritance and the initial part of Animus I don't know how many times in a row. Analyzing it and the truth is that I cannot stop reading it. I am one of those who immerse themselves in stories and try to draw at least one lesson or conclusion. What I always wonder is why Bridget was allowed to be the executor who carried out Lexi's sentence. Even in a conventional investigation, if a detective or criminologist from an investigation team has a sentimental relationship with a suspect, it is automatically removed from the investigation. As Evelyn said, what was Bridget trying to prove? In the long run it would hurt. even if Lexi had been guilty the damage would be done no matter what. Wouldn't it have been better for another executor to handle the case? Oh well, I guess Lexi being innocent was even worse because her own sister was the one who did her senseless harm. It was devastating in both ways. From what we see in this chapter, the feeling that her sister dehumanizes her and sees her as if she were an insect still remains in Lexi.

That is why I would like to see how the literary teacher Jacksmith solves these conflicts between the sisters. As Bridget told Lexi:

Please, please keep writing this story Jack. It is very good.

Author's Response: Glad it's been worth repeat reads. To be honest, this story isn't really going to deal with the logistics of why/whether Bridget should've been allowed to be Lexi's Enforcer in the first place, but obviously the overall story will be all about lingering conflicts.

Reviewer: kenrios Signed
Date: June 15 2022 Title: Chapter 12: Pilgrimage

So that was it. Sanctuary is... like a refuge from what I understood and from its characteristics I think I wasn't so wrong before. It is a place of peace and relaxation for the mind. That haven is for betas apparently who don't want contact with alphas out of trauma or precaution. I think a reviewer at Inheritance said that when I was talking about Nathaniel and his purposes criticizing the mixed zone system. Although there are also Omegas, I think that their main objective is the Betas if their security is so strict. I mean, Lexi could only get through because she was authorized by Kayla. Interesting place, but from the look Bridget gave her adoptive sister, I don't know why I sense that this isn't going to be easy for either of them. I mean, assuming there's a solution. Jack gave us some hints, Chapter 2 Lexi's ghostly appearance, "She could never afford to appear in Lexi's presence", Bridget did, her sister appeared in her presence Chapter 4 Bridget's upset when she broke up her sister's house by mistake Imagine how she feels now after unfairly hurting her sister all because of "unwavering loyalty to the mission of the Omegas". Let's see if she fixes these sisters' relationship at least to some extent. Although it will be difficult.

Author's Response: Yes, that is basically Sanctuary. Mainly a Beta haven with a limited number of Omegas and approved Alphas. Whatever happens next will indeed not be easy for anyone.

Reviewer: kenrios Signed
Date: August 23 2022 Title: Chapter 14: Turntable

Damn suspense xd. I think we are reaching if not the climax at least a crucial moment in this story. Bridget seemed very determined that her solution would be the final one but I don't think what I'm thinking of happened in such a short amount of time. I guess we'll have to wait and see what happens. Jacksmith is not a predictable author at all and I suspect that he has a surprise prepared for us hahaha

Author's Response: "Crucial moment" is a good way to put it.

Reviewer: kenrios Signed
Date: October 05 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Advent

Uff I forget rate. There are here

Reviewer: kenrios Signed
Date: November 16 2022 Title: Chapter 17: Favor

Oh, wow. It is what we imagined. I start to think and when I read this it reminds me of Melody's case with her sister Ashley. The Omega was unable to do what the Aegis Enforcers did. And yet she reluctantly had to discipline her sister. Bridget launched a spear at her sister. Do you prefer someone else to do it? WOW Although good in theory if that happened that Alpha would have to be caught and placed with an Omega. Oh Lexi what a titanic task, you will have to suffer what Bridget suffered doing this or worse. Since at least your sister did it thinking that she imparted justice but in your case... you don't have that escape. Who knows if the remedy will be worse than the disease.

The other funny thing is that Lexi studies Bridget's manual. A document known only to Aegis Enforcers in its preparation. But could Lexi read it? I mean, there are no issues like the size of the book? The Omega books must be huge in size for an Alpha. Someone would have to help Lexi with this task. And good to recommend Lexi to focus only on Class C sanctions lest the A is read and the unthinkable happens. :)

I would like to know what Lexi's acquaintances think of this. Especially Evelyn. Or will she stay secret? Let's see.

Author's Response: At least some of these considerations you have are answered in the next chapter. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: kenrios Signed
Date: May 10 2023 Title: Chapter 21: Rewind

Oh wow, this time it's for real. The advanced part of that book is… oh my Kayla. This is getting very serious. Lexi is considering sending her sister to her...? No, it can't be, it's just the nightmare in chapter 2. Although that time in the palette, Bridget did something similar. But if Lexi really does it, it would be I think... the encouragement that Omega would need or what would definitely end their relationship. I like how Bridget compares her sister to a real Enforcer without having passed a course on it. That meeting with Jenna... umm, could it be that she gave her some recommendations :D?. Nah, just kidding. What I mean is that progressively Lexi's thinking is more like that of an Omega.

Reviewer: kenrios Signed
Date: February 25 2024 Title: Chapter 26: Break

I think that a good therapy for both sisters could be a meeting with "that child" again. If we look at the facts, they remained unfinished for Tyler. I mean, Lexi was lucky enough to find a family but Nathaniel wasn't and it was brutally taken from him which led to the events of Inheritance. Always caused by lack of understanding and hatred. I think that if Lexi wants to get her mother off her back and put a tombstone over her image, she has to forgive Nathaniel and vice versa. Maybe it's the only way for that persistent voice, no doubt produced by the hatred and mental nails her mother placed on her in her conversation in Jenna's tank, to go away. It's just my opinion but as Lexi thought trying to correct errors with more errors has not exactly produced the expected results.I think that is approaching the conclusion of this story that has kept us in suspense for more than 8 years. I hope it's not the end of the Omega universe either. I am not such a good writer but I would like this universe not to die, it is very good and gives us a good message. Keep it up Jack.