Oh wow How many omegas. There are some that I know, and others I don't think so. I don't remember that Alexis Bandera. I guess she is a new character in this story. Benett seems to me that he is the son of the teacher of the history of Omega: Keeper. Dawn I remember her from Omega: Hostage and Claire is always with her imposing attitude from her but at the same time empathic from her. Although she did say something in her speech from She to Lexi that makes me wonder. How will the Omegas make sure that what happened to Lexi doesn't happen again? I remember a reviewer at Inerithance saying the same thing. A beta could do the same to an Alpha and if nobody proves his innocence of him he will be punished just like Lexi. But anyway, I guess you could count on Kayla in those cases. Let's see how the story unfolds.

Another thing that I would like to see at some point in the story is a meeting between Jenna and Lexi hahahaha. That would be nice. Kayla in a conversation with Abby told her that Jenna was the closest to Fire of all the Omegas of this generation. She enjoys her work more than she should and does it with all enthusiasm. But seeing firsthand that injustice can go both ways must have caused something in her mind to contain that sinister Fire. Or maybe she didn't do it at all.

The other most worrying thing about what is happening is Bridget's situation. If Lexi doesn't rescue her from herself she'll collapse from madness. The Alpha has to be strong, this will not be an easy mission.

In short, great story. When I read it I imagine the scenes in my mind as if I were a spectator who empathizes with the characters and therefore feels their emotions. For me it is a true work of art. Let's see how it ends. I honestly don't know how this story doesn't have more reviews or comments because it's a very good story and those comments help motivate the author to continue it.

However, Jack, I assure you that even if it is not enough, I will always be a faithful reader of this literary work.

If there is something to be recognized in Alma, it is that despite everything, she maintains the same ideas. She hasn't changed her mind despite being with the most enthusiastic Enforcer in this entire universe, until now. Although I think that last thing Jenna did may make her see things from another perspective, but in the end I think she will continue to think the same.

But well, I think we will agree that if there has been a true antagonist in these three stories, it has been Alma. Not even Nathaniel, I would say that Alma has been the true villain whose heritage and actions have reached her daughter in an unhealthy way. Let's see what happens to her in this story. I don't know why I have the impression that she will once again do her thing.

Oh, wow! This gets more and more interesting. Wow, this chapter was a bit short but it contains some important news. That party Evelyn is throwing, wow, I have to read it. Jack please follow this story please don't abandon it. If you can, finish it, it is a very good story. Every time I read it I have a need for more. That Lexi encounter with the Omegas will be crucial. Let's see to what extent Alpha has overcome her fears. I imagine there will be some of the most important people in the Omega universe. Like Claire, Jenna and Melody. Oh crap! I'm already guessing again. Even so, I still worry about Bridget's situation, if that torment causes the Fire to awaken in her it will be fatal. Let's see what comes of all this.

Fun continues

Great history so far. Waiting for the Next chapter

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm happy you liked it :D

Well, I don't want to be too picky, but I think if the giantesses wanted something from Jack, they should treat him better. After all, the existence of their race is at stake. I mean... maybe I'm wrong. Although perhaps it is the immaturity of the queen's daughter, but, friend, it is more suffering than happiness that has fallen on Jack and if we want the little boy to have courage in his task, they should give him pleasure not suffering.

Hi Greenmon. I congratulate you, you have the ability to create wonderful and truly unique characters. The story so far, impeccable. They are very good ideas.I would like to ask if there is a possibility to incorporate dragon girls into your story or nekos. When I say dragon girls I mean giant girls but with draconic characteristics. For example dragon tails, claws or scales in some places but his torso and face are human. And if you also add a naive or playful personality, with that unique touch that you give to each character, I think it would be wonderful. Thank you for sharing this great story with us. Keep it up

Author's Response: I don't think it's much of a spoiler at this point but the dragon mentioned so far is in fact a dragon-girl with features much like you described. As for nekos, not sure they fit this setting, but my other story Conquest of Earth has a lot of giant catgirls with very playful personalities, if that's your thing.

Sexy story and very well narrated. It is incredible, besides the fetish, there is always that drop of feelings that makes reading attractive and makes your face blush.

The part that I laughed a lot was when you wrote

The resultant of these two forces is a null vector.

Well most of the time it isn't. Almost always the positive forward is greater hahahaha. I guess the little mouse really had a strong will. But as a phrase from Buena Fe, a musical group from my country, says: There are things that pull more than four carts

Wow, this just keeps getting better. It is an exciting development of events. I assumed that Amber would be that, the discordant note between those two. Oh, and Amber meets a guy who's a tinie hunter. wow that doesn't sound good

I think these two are definitely two lovebirds already. The two of them are liking the relationship and honestly I think we have reached a point where the relationship between these two is just tender. But well, from the experience I have on this site, there is always a factor that puts relationships between a tiny and a giantess to the test. In most cases it always destroys the relationship but let's see how this story unfolds. Keep it up Green.