In a session of girl talk, two women discuss there dirty deeds that they have done to the men in their lives.
Still great, But getting repetitive after the first two. Needs some more of the guy's point of view.
John has a dream, a dream that many of us share. WHen he acts out that dream he learns that is not all that is cracked up to be.
Very good job of blending physiological accuracy, with a believable and riviting story line. I would like to see this work finished, as it is one of the very best I have read so far.
Mark shares his fantasy with his girlfriend, little does he know that his fantasy is about to become a reality.
Again an excellent job and the continuation I was looking for. This was a much different way to continue a story. I like it, very original in this venue.
Pure Excellence.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks, Vito. This one was really enjoyable to write. Glad you liked it!
Amazing story that is well written. It would make an interesting movie plot.
Author's Response: Thanks, Vito. I actually think this one is less filmic than some of my other stories, but I can see what you mean.
Fantastic imagination and full use of the vore fantasy. Well written and a good read.
Excellent reread gets better and better.
one of the best I've ever read, good attention to the ending. Most just 'stop' rather then 'end' an otherwise good story. You did a great job.
Fascinating story with a believable plot, if you are into black magic. Again, well written and an excellent job.
Good story, but has a major tech. error. HIV is transmitted only by direct blood to blood contact. Digestion and absorption preclude that.
Author's Response: thanks Vito! i was actually aware of that fact, but hey, it sounded like plausible drama at the time :-) thanks for reading!
Excellent so far, still waitingfor the continued to be.
This was a great, imaginative read. I enjoyed it for not only that, but for the quality of the writing. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you for your comment, Vito. yes, i really think putting a bit of effort in the writing department really pays off for overall enjoyment. Thanks a mil!!
An excellent expression ov what I look for. It should be expanded.
Excellence to the voriphile purist.
Good, but with more of a story leading into the incredible journey, then continuing after, it would be excellent and a 10.
I really enjoyed this read very much and put it at the top of what I have seen so far. I hope to see more done with these charachters by this very talented author.
Good Writing, needs an ending.
Author's Response: I don't know how to end it just yet.
Good writing,strong story line, and excellent continuity. I was glued to this read from the first word to the last. I look forward to the rest of the story.
