Penname: Raviouli [Contact] Real name: patrick
Member Since: December 29 2022
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Magna Gratia by GTS33, Melanie Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 79]
Summary:

In a world where the big regularly dominate and abuse the small, Jeannine wants to break the mold. Believing all three races to be inherently equal, she rescues 'tinies' and protects them in her home. Assuming the role of 'protector' she seeks to help as many as she can, even though the task is far bigger than even she is.


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Middle Age (50+), Fantasy, Maternal, Sci-Fi, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: Magna Gratia Universe
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 182625 Read Count: 397034
[Report This] Published: August 24 2022 Updated: March 06 2024
Reviewer: Raviouli Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 29 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Chapter 1

I love the story, and the emotions are great, but the size of the liliputans doesn't make sense. You say the are a quarter of a milimeter which would mean you would barely be able to see them, or not see the at all. But in your story you act as if they are quarter of a centimeter, half a centimeter, or even a centimeter. I love the story but this is just a nit pick, and a suggestion to go back and make the height a little taller.

Author's Response:

The size of the Lillis remains consistent throughout the story. It is possible to see things that are 0.25mm with the naked eye, even more so if you are leaning in close. As for making out their expressions without the aid of a magnifying glass, I can see why that might not be as believable. That is why I described Jeannine's ability to 'see them' as more of her picking up on body language, such as waving their arms around. You make a valid point, but be mindful of the wording in the scene. I'm very committed to realism, and I hope that shows!

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