nice clasic story. I hope the tiny dad is living in a hamster cage in his youngest daughter room and his wife find a new father for his kids so he could be the family`s pet or something 

That was a good story, I enjoyed reeding it so much. I liked how you mad Sara shrink down and waste her life for something as stupid as her mother just wanted bigger tits to have a better sex life. I also like the idea of that she was under her kids brothers mercy.

my feedback would be that, for me it would be so much interesting if Sara had one brother and one sister instead of 2 brothers. it would be fun to see her serving a small purpose of being locked in a cage for her won protection and under her little sister`s supervision in her room all day maybe next to her hamster pet for example. never allowed to get out and wondering around the house cuz its too dangerous foe her. and every one in a thousand times she is out with the family her little sister decide when and how long  it will be. it would be fun to see Sara getting angry and protest but can`t do anything. 

also I think it would have been more fun if the mother would have moved on quicker than that, like in a couple of days, and then going back to normal parting and living her life. 

I also thought that it would be so hot if Sara was older than that like she is 30 or 29 and have a successful career and some girly party friends too. it would be so fun to see how it would look like when her parents let her kind and sweetheart little 9 or 10 years old look after her cuz she a princess and get everything she wants. to see Sara`s lil sis speaks with so much honor respect to her friend but she speak with overprotective mom tone with her while Sara is watching her friends speak with her new Guardian like they have allows spoken to her before like a kid that she really is. 

maybe also if Sara has a teen cousin that she use to babysit coming over and see the new treatment she will get from her too.

I like to mention that Im personally a fan of normal Giantesses and giants, meaning by that, I dont  really like the super mean and evil giantesses where they threat and purposely torture with laughter and all. I think the real torture for a shrunken person is to see everyone normal is living there life partying, dancing ,having sex Infront of them as if nothing weird going on as if its has always been normal for the tiny person to be tiny. they move on fast and so casually change their treatment. torture is to be forced to touch them when they hold you their sweat and smell get all over you never take what ever you say seriously, to be kicked out of grownups world being left to kids to look after you to teach them responsibility and innocently use your life to make mistake and learn  , seeing their real unperfections that the normal size wont see so up and close like their boogers and leftover food on the teeth the toe jam....etc. and to make it worse all this is happening because you have a bad luck that is all life just decided that you should have a hard life while seeing your friend and neighbors and family giants free and happy. 

Have you seen the movie four Christmases 2008. i remember when Kate was chasing her little niece into the jumping house and then the kids where just innocently playing with her but she actually being tortured by these lil kids while at the same time her mother and sister are having a real grownups time. she was calling for their help but her sister just thought its cute she is playing with her 7 y old daughter and they just waved to her while she was crying to be saved from the kids amusement . imagen she shrunk down and her mother even though she loves her but she let her live in a cage in her sister`s daughter`s room. that would be a great story.

love your style and loved the story just want to share my thoughts.

how cool it would be if Priya meet Kate friend Danielle and go out to huck up with guys after a party together or something as Kate  getting crazy and crying as she trying to get her friend attention from Priya`s feet. It would be interesting to see some of Kate`s family and friends and rivals happy and living their life in front of her while she lost her body and is just a cell on some random girl feet served a purpose of helping her feet to look and feel nice. just a thought.

I like the way this story is going. I hope you would post  pictures of all your characters too. just to have a mental image of how the character look like. you can maybe choose a celebrity image and also could mention a movie or Tv show  of them to know how they act and talk and all. I might be wrong but I think when a writer write a story they kind of having people in real life to helpe shaping the characters in their stories.  

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! There's only a few stories on here typically that post images of characters. Personally, I'd rather just leave it up to the reader's imagination. I definitely did have some faces in mind for most characters but that might not be how readers want to imagine them. :)

I really think this story is amazing! I love your writing style, the way you describing the characters and how they are like. I especially like how Clara and her husband are kind and caring toward Sam, even though Sam cant see it cuz she is so small. It’s interesting how Sam’s situation isn’t about cruelty but just the huge difference in their sizes and perspectives. Clara is being loving and maternal but she sees Sam just as a smart version of some kind of mouse, sometime over loving is kinnda annoying like when a person keep talking to you in a baby voice cuz they love you a lot and then you

I’d love to see Clara’s daughter in this story if there is part 2.

It would also be great if future stories could include daughters and sons, whether they’re teens and show how they’d interact with a tiny person like Sam. just to see how younger characters might handle and treat the tiny differently.

also hope you would make part 2 of the tiny friend vet clinic

Thank you for creating such a unique and warm story. I look forward to seeing more

another nice chapter i love it 

for me personally I like the idea of Sam still being treated unintentionally like a child or a tiny puppy. I think the irritating baby treatment and never being taken seriously despite all her effort to get the giant grownups attention is what makes this journey fun. think about the old movie the incredible shrinking women , when Pat was tiny she was screaming and jumping all the time to get people attention but they just never take her seriously because of her small size. 

I would like to see Sam meeting other people and see how the dynamics will be when people talk to her like as if she is a baby, it would be interesting to see her get angry and try to attack someone's nose or toe with her tiny punches and how people think she looks adorable trying to be all brave and tough. maybe having a time out would also be appropriate for her new stats 

you probably would like to consider verity of elements to add to the story such as , real pets, teens and old friends maybe some babysitting by some kid Sam used to babysit when she was normal.

overall great story , looking forward for more