Penname: JLZ [Contact] Real name: Luke Parker
Member Since: March 18 2012
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I like being shrunk 1in or less.  BBW and SSBBW stories need to have more attention


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Close Encounters by Chozo Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

What happens when the hottest cheerleader in school has unrestricted access to her father's shrinking machine, and has no qualms about using it to turn other people into tiny pets/slaves to be sold for profit or given away to her friends? These are the tales of the people who were gullible enough to fall into her web.

June 28, 2013 EDIT: Finally updated for the first time in over 3 years!


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Butt, Body Exploration, Couples , Feet, Entrapment, Gentle, Growing/Shrinking out of clothes, Humiliation, Insertion, Instant Size Change, Mouth Play, Slave, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5171 Read Count: 99277
[Report This] Published: September 11 2009 Updated: June 28 2013
Reviewer: JLZ Signed
Date: March 18 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Purple Sweatpants and Lipgloss

good story, i just dont like how you portray beth as an ugly character.  This dichotomy of skinny and fat doesn't mean you should make everything else about these women a dichotomy: hannah beautiful, beth frumpy, hannah hot miniskirt, beth sweatpants (some guys like the sweatpants and i do too its just why does hannah get a miniskirt that is sexy and hot while beth gets something bland and covers her up), hell even the names sound completely polar, even though beth is a good name, its made to make the name hannah more appealing and intricet.  if you continue story, please make beth a little more appealing.  large women are beautiful too.  thank you



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I agree beauty is in the eye of the beholder... but did I actually say Beth was ugly? That may be what you inferred, but that may not be what was implied. I'll have to revisit this story at some point and look at what I wrote and see what direction to take it from there.

Summary:

Lisa has an ant-sized sister named Sira who she loves to torment.


Categories: Giantess, Butt, Crush, Destruction, Entrapment, Feet, Footwear, Humiliation, Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8066 Read Count: 133737
[Report This] Published: January 26 2015 Updated: July 19 2015
Reviewer: JLZ Signed
Date: April 12 2017 Title: Chapter 7: A friend after all?

I'm kinda guessing Trisha has a plan to get back at Lisa for her torment but I am not seeing how.  Hopefully thats what you are going for other wise I dislike both Trisha and Emily.  This story is very good and I am hoping somehow things stsrt looking up for Sira

Summary:

A struggling science teacher finds himself in the hands (literally) of his favorite student.


Categories: Giantess, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Growing/Shrinking Out of Clothes, Instant Size Change, Maternal
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2128 Read Count: 9740
[Report This] Published: December 21 2018 Updated: December 21 2018
Reviewer: JLZ Signed
Date: December 21 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Scott's Dilemma

Nice start, hopefully Scott feels less pathetic and more happy in his role as pet.  Of course this is depending on what Abigail's personality develops to.  For clarity, was the syringe going to shrink him farther than an inch or two to begin with?



Author's Response:

Yes, it would have. I suppose I should have clarified that he didn't inject the entire dose. I'll fix that to avoid any future confusion by that, thank you!