In a session of girl talk, two women discuss there dirty deeds that they have done to the men in their lives.
This story really tickles my vore fantasy and is a perfect set-up for a sequel or two. Adeline, you have a definite talent.
A woman discusses her life and how she has swallowed men most of her life upon the realization of her powers.
Hi Adeline, I have to say this is one of my all time favorite vore stories and a classic in its own right. Do you still write? ladyprey
This has to be in the top 3 of my favorite vore stories and I thank you for it. This story inspired "The Clone" and if you read it I'd like to know what you thought.
I've read this story 2 0r 3 times now and really enjoy it . Well written and good pacing, CXan I find your work anywhere else?
I can't believe this story got no reviews. This is a worthy story; I thought so the first time I read it a while back, and I still think so. Bravo and please point me to more of your vore writings. ladyprey
Good story and nicely written. Definitely could be expanded. ladyprey
the end of the world, at the hands of beautiful giantesses. Need I say more?
What can I say that hasn't been said; great story and of course what makes it all worth while, great vore descriptions. Let's face it, we love the vore.
Author's Response: I'm real glad you enjoy this one, ladyprey! Vore on a planetary scale is bliss, isn't it? :-)
Nice job girlfood. I like where this is going. Certainly hope you continue. ladyprey
I'm enjoying this story and it's an imagiative premise. A story with a belly-full of potential I'd say. ladyprey
Author's Response: How does one know if one has written a good story? When one gets a review from Lady Prey! Thanks man, I hope you enjoy the chapters to come.
Good story, Girlfood. There's something really appealing in the idea of the predator being a trusted friend of the unsuspecting prey until the moment of thruth.
Author's Response: I agree completely. As long as it's not a family member I am into the unsuspecting person being eaten by a trusted friend.
I like where this is going. Very nice job of writing.
Very nicely done. Always enjoy your stories Girlfood.
Author's Response: Thanks bro! Back at you.
Good start Girlfood. I have high hopes for this story having read your earlier stories on this site. BTW, what happened to your collaberation on 'The Realm of Malanie'? ladyprey
Author's Response:
Thanks Lady Prey. That means a lot. I have a good idea of where I want to take this story, now it just remains to put it down.
As to Realm of Melanie; Ralf and I are still collaborating on it. My last chapters were both 20 and 21 (small trouble, i think). He has been good enough to allow me some time before my next submission which is good because i hadn't a clue as to what to write until recently. I really have to get cracking. Thanks for the review. I hope to post again soon so if you have suggestions on this or Melanie then dont be shy.
A man broke up with a sweetheart recenetly, but left in her possession, a special ring. Not wanting to tell her just how special it was, he decides to steal it back, shrinking down and sneaking into her home. Things only go downhill from there.
A trade with a user on another site. Enjoy.
I like it. Kind of a different twist to a subject that desperately needs some different twists.
Author's Response: Would have liked a higher score, but what the hey, I'll take what I can get in the venue of responses to my work. And thanks. I tried to include a theme or two that's not as common, including a little in a kiss, which, while it happens, is still quite rare.
Interesting. If you are writing this tongue-in-cheek then I have to give you credit for a good job. I hope you do continue and I'll reserve judgement on a rating till I see more!
Author's Response:
ya, i do prefer to write tongue-in-cheek, at least when it comes to their dialogue. when it's the narrative, i use more proper english. ;D after all, that's what my degree says i'm supposed to do! lol thank you for your review. i have a good bit of story planned out but i'm not sure how long it's going to take me to get to some of the more juicier scenes that are flitting around in my head. lol. i will perservere, though, and keep writing if not for the reviews then simply for the sake of writing.
~ARWAD
Jennifer Demott was introduced in my first story "A Wish COme True." She has discovered that swallowing a man whole greatly enhances her sexual arousal and orgasms and has continued to shrink men to take home for her sexual gratification. Complications ensue when her missing boyfriend Mark's sister tracks her down demanding an answer as to what happened to her brother.
Where have you been Adeline? I've missed your stories and thoroughly enjoyed reading this one again. ladyprey
After disappearing for months, a man finds himself back in his home city but being only an inch and a half tall. He finds refuge at his friend Jennifer's place. She takes him in but soon their friendship starts developing along a totally unexpected road.
Nice descriptive writing and a very real take on the emotional POV under the circumstances. Thank you.
Very nicely done. I like the way you built up to the fateful day, all-consuming for Jon.
Author's Response: thank you Lady Prey. I was very happy to read your review.
A story about a womans inner feelings.
Hey there, very erotic writing but yes, a little repetative.
Personally I would have liked a little more teasing in the vore passages whwere the helpless victims have a chance to anticipate their terrible trip and their eventual destination and the horror of being swallowed alive.
I've devoted a whole chapter to the victims terror of looking into her throat and realizing its sole purpose
and the erotic emotions of both victim and predator
as the action takes place as if in slow motion. Just a suggestion.
Anyway, I really enjoyed your story and hope you continue to write, It's refreshing to get the female angle on this. ladyprey
Thank you ladyprey ı wrıte wıth my emotions and that was how ı felt durıng that period ı am so glad you enjoyed my story dıd you masturbate whılst readıng it ıf so then ı was successfull x.
Amanda.
A depressed young man seeks psychological treatment, but ends up getting more than he bargained for when he shrinks in the office of Dr. Sandra Adams, who has a very unusual appetite.
That's what I like; a vore story with a little conscience and a fresh perspective on what amounts to a really weird fantasy.
Did you know that everyone has a primal leaning towards vore but it just hasn't been
triggered in very many of us. You can prove it but I don't recommend trying.
Very well done on the story.