Reviewer: Theodous Signed
Date: August 11 2012
Title: None
It's hard to express how much I've been enjoying this story. Even from the begining, there were alot of elements that you just don't see touched down on very often. Like the way that Jenna would worry about the shape and smell of her feet whenever David was near them. And the steps that she took to ensure that they were pleasantly fresh.. Until of course they became more comfortable with one another. And she realized that David was being genuinely sincere about liking the natural smells of her feet. :)
But really, it's been the evolving relationship between the two that really grips me. Almost as if it was taken from my very fantasies in a way. Very touching to say the least. Even now, when Jenna is showing her very worst side. Though if anyone deserved to be on the recieving end of it, it was Carrie. And from the looks of things this might all be the best thing that could have happened to Carrie. Or at least, I'm really hoping so. Would be wonderful to see the two of them become friends. And maybe even for Carrie to adopt David and Jenna's appreciation for feet and being tiny. ^.^
Either which way, I just wanted to finally say, your doing a wonderful job with the story. And to keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. It's always nice to hear from readers. I will do my best to keep the story fun and engaging, while maintaining the relationships between the characters. It's been very entertaining, sharing my fantasies with others. If I'm lucky, I'll be able to keep it up for a while, before people get bored. :P