Penname: Zanderas [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: August 04 2013
Membership status: Member
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The man who will make you love story with your giantess.


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Reviews by Zanderas
Summary:

An honest employee of the Techilogic Corporation sets out to investigate the new widespread use of the shrink ray, only to uncover darker revelations about the business he’ll soon wish had stayed buried.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Young Adult 20-29, Adult 30-39, Mature (40-49), Entrapment, Feet, Gentle, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, New World Order, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Doll (12 in. to 6 in.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: Oversight
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45082 Read Count: 114183
[Report This] Published: May 27 2014 Updated: July 10 2014
Reviewer: Zanderas Signed
Date: June 07 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Report 1: Preliminary Findings

Pretty interest take on typical shrink story. Very interesting to see the social issues being able to shrink people makes and how dehumanizing it can be to both parties.

 

I think Howard is starting to see that as well and I have a feeling this "teacher" is going to push him further down that path.

Reviewer: Zanderas Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Report 1: Preliminary Findings

Rating things...right that is a thing you do here....



Author's Response:

Hmm yes I believe you're right...

Thanks for reading/reviewing! And you are right about the teacher.

Reviewer: Zanderas Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 13 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Report 4: The Williams Family, Interview 2: Ruby Williams and Trish Reed

Nice to see a story taking a realistic approach to this thing and not just everyone being crazy and evil. I do have a bad feeling that our protag is going to wind up just being shrunk himself to keep him silent, but can't help but hope for a different outcome.

 

Poor Ruby, though, having to torture her sister she loves only to please her psychotic mother.

 

Also like how the people being reviewed who got shrank are getting less and less...condemable? The first guy kinda deserved it skipping out of his wife and daughter and leaving them in poverty. Still a bit :/ but its hard to take the guys side.

 

Now, though, the shrunken people don't deserve the treatment they get at all.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I'll hold off on commenting on the outcome of it for now.

The cases are definitely intended to have a lot of gray area, with more of a lean toward the shrunken.

Warming Up by Emma Gear Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: After a nice workout session a girl suddenly finds herself in a place she doesn't recognize. There's a camera though, and a box full of miniature people she's been ordered to get rid of.


Categories: Crush, Feet, Humiliation, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Nano (1/2 in. to 2.5 nanometers)
Size Roles: F/f, F/m
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9567 Read Count: 9341
[Report This] Published: February 19 2017 Updated: February 25 2017
Reviewer: Zanderas Signed
Date: February 20 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good short story with a nice twist at the end. I really liked the switching between view points from the various characters, though it got a bit jarring near the end with it sometimes being hard to tell whos pov we were looking from.

 

I was a bit sad we didn't get to see Cathrine do a bit of squishing, but the twist in her being part of the scheme was a nice surprise. And damn that micro/giga scene was well done. Those are hard to do right, but you pulled it off.

 

My only real big complaint was Cathrine didn't get trapped in the shoe for a bit longer and slowly get squished, but meh. Still good