Just a casual GTS Writer. Pretty lazy but I do enjoy writing and reading about Growth and Shrinking. If you like my stuff feel free to let me know. Criticisms and feedback is always welcome. I always enjoy a good GTS-based discussion.
I do write some journalism stuff from time to time too, I suppose that's worth noting.
A young workingman lacking confidence and an easy mind has his mundane life transformed after an uncharacteristically reckless night. Literally.
This was a really pleasant read. Love what you did with all this. Can't wait to see more from you man.
Thanks, Asterisk! I appreciate you taking the time to read through it.
A rivalry between co-workers produces a bet.
A bet begets a baseball game and stakes.
The game and stakes proclaims a winner and a loser.
Said stakes are honored, albeit forcibly.
Alrighty, did a quick read through of the story so here's some feedback.
First off you have a decent thing going here. I wouldn't call this story bad at all and it's actuall a little impressive considering it's your first story. I'm interested to see where this goes.
Now for some negative things. Grammar and sentence structure is off in a decent number of places. Some lines read like their overly complicated and there's a couple typos and at least one space issue. That's not too bad though. I think what could really help your story out is more detail. I know what happened but what runs through his head at the time? How do other people react? How about some world building? What lead to this game? Who agreed to the bet? They aren't fully needed but details like that can really sell the world and immerse the reader.
But like I said, it isn't bad at all. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with this!
A Hispanic California college student named Maria acquires an entire shrunken prison complete with all the inmates and guards.
This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events and incidents are either the products of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.
An interesting chapter. I find myself wondering what the camera wound up playing but I'm guessing that's gonna come in later. That aside the chapter was nicely paced and kept my attention til the end. I didn't notice any problems aside from maybe a couple minor grammar things.
Keep it up!
Well, looks like I'm doing a good job. Thanks for stopping by Asterisk
This will be Graphic. Abandon all hope all ye who enter here.
You have my attention.
Now keep it.
I dont think I can. this story is about to take a huge turn, a complete 180 from what i've been writng so far. I know the type of giantess stuff your into and this is not it. this is only the beginning and it only gets worse from here on out. but thanks for reviewing this far!
Great story, I'm a huge sucker for evil stories centered around crushing and torture and this idea is unique enough that it puts a nice spin on it. It's hard for me to find an issue to actually critique. It was a good read start to finish.
This is growth story that takes place in the world of the anime Kill La Kill. Read as Satsuki terrorizes a city to show the world why they should consider her their new goddess. (May contain spoilers from the Kill La Kill series)
(Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.)
(Yo it's Lulu. Glad to see you writing again)
This is pretty great. I love how quickly you get to the action and just have fun with it. Definitely loving all the Satsuki feet stuff too. Though I do wish we spent a bit more time detailing stuff, granted that might mess with the pacing a bit. Regardless, definitely an instant favorite. Here's me looking forward to more and fingers crossed on a giant Ryuko at some point.
(Thanks didn't even know you were on this site, I have to be sure to check your work out.)
Thanks, If you know my past stories, then you know I am more of a writer of shrink stories and this is a different approach for me. I will be sure to learn more about how to handle growth stories and flesh out the details even more in the future and as for Ryuko, she will most likely be in another story I wite in the future, but I do plan on making her very, very huge in the future so look out for that one.
An honest employee of the Techilogic Corporation sets out to investigate the new widespread use of the shrink ray, only to uncover darker revelations about the business he’ll soon wish had stayed buried.
Got to admit I'm really enjoying this one. The interview format reminds me a lot of the Summer Job in a good way plus it's nice to see this sort of subject approached from a more inquisitive, distant point of view. Can't wait to see more.
Aside from that I do find it a little dialogue heavy but there's no helping that with the way it's structured. Keep up the good work!
Thanks for reading! I realize this one won't be for everyone since it is almost entirely dialogue, but it was important to me to keep up the style of the thing.
I'm a big fan of this dialogue. There's a lot of subtlety here. I can clearly envision what the situations are like for each of the shrunken characters without anyone spelling it out and people trying to be nonchalant and even cryptic about it makes them feel much more real than say, boasting about it. You're getting a lot done here with next to no descriptions.
Some fun stuff, and whoever voted it down was a serious ass. Keep it on up Emma
After a woman unknowingly swallows her shrinking son on a birthday cake, a second size-changing accident occurs and threatens to bring down her family and half the neighborhood.
A sequel to Birthday Surprise, done as a commission.
It's always a delight to see some familial size, particularly the microscopic variety like this. I wasn't familiar with the original until a couple days ago but this is a pretty enjoyable story so far. I look forward to see where you go with it.
Thanks much. The tone/events of this story will feel pretty separate from that first one, since it's focused more on the giant characters than the small ones, but hopefully it's still enjoyable.
Hello everyone!
This is my first real story on Giantessworld. Naturally, its just going to be high-quality smut (at least I hope it ends up being high quality). This is going to be a sizefic in the context of Shrink High. If you haven't played it already, I suggest you do. It would help your enjoyment of this immensely, though you should still like it either way.
Please feel free to comment and review this and give honest feedback, I want to improve and make the best Shrink High content (and size content in general) as I can!
Here I was worried this story fell to the ether. Another nice chapter. Here's hoping for more. And holding out hope for my girl Erika
It wouldn't be Shrink High without her and V-D, let's be real here, and thanks for the compliment! I think you and everyone else will be happy when that chapter arrives; just a bit longer! (tm) Its going to be a glorious one.
This chapter was actually done on the same day as the others, basically. I just utterly lacked energy to proofread it myself and my friends were too tired to proofread, I had to enlist someone else's help and that only ended up happening yesterday.
It's not often we get a Shrink High story around here. Bit of a pleasure honestly. So far so good. I like that you're giving some of the secondary characters some much needed love. Keep it up!
Thank you, I appreciate it!
A bully shrinks her victim, and the long-term results shock them both
I normally don't comment much on stories just because...Well I don't haha. But you've been doing very good with this. The demeaning dialogue from Meredith is both very hot and smug but also flows pretty naturally. Helps the rest is well written too.
You keep teasing me with those more micro sizes too haha, but color me impressed. Can't wait to see where you go with this one.
Well, thanks for breaking your no-commenting streak! I appreciate getting feedback on stuff, it's really the only "payment" i get for this. Meredith is amazingly smug, but I think that naturally comes with the giantess superiority complex.
Micro sizes are the best : ) Glad you're looking forward to more!
It is natural for beings to seek one that can stand as an equal. Regardless of borders and boundaries of size.
If you wanted to write Masako size. Just say so
Quiet, redhead addict, no one asked you. :p
A story inspired and set in the same universe as "Make America Big Again" by Asterisk, Inwiththebooks although probably not a one to one correlation.
WARNING: This is a macrophilia fetish story, but does have the dressing of a political satire to help drive the narrative. As such, there will be concepts that could be construed as political commentary. If this concept or the idea of a narrative which might be in conflict with your own world view makes you uncomfortable, turn back.
WARNING: This story is a spawn of my fucked up twisted brain; the story is sadistic, gory, and brutal, as a warning, and if you question your constition, probably not for you. If these concepts bother you, turn back.
Ok, now that's out of the way...
The story picks up in media res - after men have been reduced to Tinies some women form an underground railroad of sorts in an attempt to smuggle tinies away from harsh owners to New Zealand - a place where tinies have normal rights and there is an attempt to reverse the process.
Our protaganist - mark - is about to start his most dangerous part of this journey yet - getting through the airport. He's about an inch tall.
As the name implies, foot heavy themes.
I can safely say I never expected anyone to actually do anything with Books' and I's little silly setting idea, but color me pleasantly surprised. You did pretty well with this I'd say. I can see a few rough edges here or there, but the concept and execution are both solid. Very nicely done!
Thanks! I really liked your work as well! One of the few giantess stories that managed to stand out in my mind even though i first read it years ago!
Softball star, all around tomboy, and natural domme Rachel decides that classmate Koji is a good luck charm. Rachel can also shrink people. How will our anxious pushover of a narrator handle this?
I gotta hand it to you, Rachel feels very fleshed out and believable. Not all the content in this story is for me - In fact a lot of it isn't, but there's a good sense of flow and pacing and the key dynamic between the two is very good. Which is the most important thing.
Aster McMaster, you are such a sweetheart. Thank you for the thoughtful response. I'm glad you could enjoy the story despite some of the fet content not being your thing. Hopefully the next one will have more stuff you're into.
After being shot down by the monsterous Titan forces of the Confederation, Aron finds himself behind enemy lines and struggling to escape a city taken by enemies with no regard for the lives trampled underfoot.
No reviews for this one? Wow, surprising. You did good on this one man.
Thanks! Hey, long as people enjoy reading it to some extent thats all I hope for.
Exactly what it says on the tin, herein are archives of RP logs from across the years of Asterisk and myself writing together. These will be a bit different than normal stuff we post as there won't be much formatting or editing done here. There may be a light bit of context given at the start of each chapter. They aren't in any order either, more of some highlights of ours posted every now and then we figured people might enjoy reading.
Was a good time writing these.
In a world of mixed sizes the larger you are, the higher your value. Something not many accept. Reality often cares little for acceptance.
A lovely little scenario and simple story. Nicely done.
Thanks, the big NEET size is a good mood.
A fun little read and made me laugh more than once. Well done