Penny is one of those girls that kinda flirts with you, but then later says that she isn't interested in you. The talk about walking with him to school, staring at the clouds, and then telling him to scoot toward him. Maybe I'm trying to find clues to put them together, but I sometimes mistake Penny's caring demeanor for Jack's romantic interest.

So Penny knows the story, and she even got a little mad that it happened to Jack. At least she shows her concern.

Parts of me wonder if Penny was turned on by what Cailtin did. Sure, we know Penny was shocked, but were some of the details at least a bit interesting to her?

I think when Jack goes back to school, not bad will happen, there will be a few nervous moments where Jack feels very scared.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

I just watched a show called "13 reasons why" on Netflix, and the show was eerily similar to this story. The characters match those from the show to this story and even the setting is the same. The one thing differing is that the victim in the show commits suicide and I'm wondering if Jack ever considered death as an option since he has been taking shit left and right.

I have been waiting for this chapter for a lot time. The moment when Jack gets his balls back after they were taken from Caitlin. He finally gets on that bus and takes on the daily struggle of school.

Jack sat next to a kid who was 8 or 9? How old is Jack again? Are they both going to the same school? Something doesn't seem right.

Ah, so Jack's vision is so bad that he can only look at Delon's shoes as he follows him. Since Jack didn't want to make much eye contact, his blurry vision may have indirectly helped him.

I still don't know what to think of Alex. I still think she is an enemy and the glasses are just a fake sign of trust. Maybe Cailtin had them remake Jack's glasses custom made with a built in tracker so she can keep track of Jack constantly. Why else was Alex following Jack to class? She was leading him to a trap. Alex should be naturally faster and beat him to the door, but she let Jack go first so she can make sure he doesn't escape. Sneaky alpha girls.

I think Jack needs to workout a little. Or atleast do some stretches. Get that blood flowing instead of feeding the world and cowering. He needs a confidence boost more than ever. If this mental torture continues, I fear he might take drugs or something, anything to ease the pain.

Will Jack get a "fuck it" moment where he just doesn't care anymore? Will he proclaim to the school about the abuse and start talking to people boldly without care? I'm sensing that he might explode on someone with anger. He broke down in tears with Penny and Alex just now, but Jack still is bottling up that frustrated emotion.

Penny has returned to comfort Jack again. I wonder how this relationship will progress.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Yes! I love it when Caitlin is back in charge. I find every scene with her so entertaining and her torment of Jack just makes me smile since I love her sadistic side. 

I thought she might feel bad about his leg, but I guess she just took advantage of it instead. 

Even the people that bully Jack are scared of Caitlin, which makes Caitlin all the more powerful. 

Now that Caitlin knows that Jack has escaped once before, you know she's going to be extra careful to keep him locked up. I like this idea of smuggling him in her bag. That's a good way to sneak him out. 

As for keeping him in her house, she might have to use some decent bondage to tie him up and make Jack completely helpless. 

Either way, I'm excited and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Haha, your reply to my review stated that you would post the next chapter by tomorrow which means July 2nd. You must be busy at the moment. I hope you are continuing this story; You left me hanging after an incredicable chapter 16.

I hope you can come back soon. I cant wait for the next chapter!

Yes you are back! thank you!

Emily sounds so sexy with her whispers and ideas. Even the ones about tying Mark up are fantastic, and I cant wait to see what happens next!

Cheryl has been tormenting Abby for a while now. Or it seems like it.

I hope Emily brings a new treatment to add to this story. It seems to be getting better and better.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Welcome back! and Merry Christmas to you too!

This chapter almost feels like a christmas present.

Great chapter with lots of detail. Poor Abby, she is literally lost in there and now she has to deal with Lauren making moves unaware of Abby's presence.

I expect more dialogue next chapter, but this one had phenomenal descriptions! Especially while understanding Abby's perespective.

Cant wait for Mark's part!

Author's Response:

This is maybe the third/fourth draft of this particular chapter and I did originally have some dialogue in it, but I felt having Abby buried in flesh didn't give her much room to speak, and as for Cheryl, she was talking fine! Abby just couldn't hear her haha. But, expect much more dialogue in the next chapter!

Thank you for you kind words, and have a great holiday.

You were right, you did post around New Years. Happy New Year!

Anyway, that was a long night for Abby. I even read the last 5 chapters just to see where we last left off with Mark.

Chapter 16 featured Cheryl leaving Mark with Emily and Emily began discussing sexy torture methods that would love to see happen. Then chapter 17 included Emily taking Mark to her room.

Its a cliffhanger so good, that I cant wait that we finally can get back to Mark. My favorite idea from chapter 16 was Emily sewing Mark to her panties. Hopefully Emily keeps her promise.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Whoa there! Only one more chapter! We need one chapter to describe his journey into the butthole and othen one when she feels satisfied and does a workout or something with him inside.

Anyway, what a chapter. "A picture means 1000 words." My goodness, a picture for this masterpiece would be the two girls talking with one point to their ass and the dude is in on the stool listening in the corner of the picture. My, what a scene!

I hope for an incredible finish!

Author's Response:

Sorry most likely just one more chapter. What you just described is in a another story I 'm working on but I have another story to post first before I post that story.

Hmm. Things are getting very intense. Some deep scary thoughts here.

But at last Amanda is finally gonna walk in. I believe he will go inside her ass, won't he? And that's how the story ends, right? Or will he get shoved up there in the beginning of the chapter, and you describe the sensations in there? Lots of possibilities.

I think you said like 80 forms of the female ass. (I didn't count.)

What I'm wondering next is how he will end up in there. Will he hide on the bed, a chair, her underwear drawer? All these places can lead up to the ass.

Also, I want to know how he will go in there? Like, is he tied up, is he blindfolded, is he gagged so he is forced to breathe thru his nose? Will his head stick out? Will he go headfirst?

There are plenty of ways to do this. I just can't wait to find out which method you will choose. (Maybe multiple methods!)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Very deep.

ThomThumb, if you want an idea to get you started on your next story, here is a suggestion:

Main character is a guy from college, and he has a girlfriend, who is ok looking. She invites him to her house and the guy falls in love with his girlfriends mom, or atleast fantasizes at the mom and her ripened body.

Whatever story you write next, Im sure it will be great!