Reviewer: Pixis Signed
Date: February 20 2010
Title: Chapter 1: CIVIC SIEGE
I'm going to be nitpicky here so I hope I don't offend. Still don't agree with some of this (Flash is suicidal? Elasti-Girl eats her own son?). But it's a vore story so it's more based in fetish than character, I suppose.
Don't think Wonder Woman and Talia were alive for centuries, at least not in the comics. This version might be different.
I did like seeing Doll Man, Giganta, Leviathan, the Shade, and all the others. I think we just disagree in our takes on the DC heroes. Sorry I'm being picky and taking this stuff too seriously (as I often do).
Author's Response: I don't mind your comments at all. It's fun analysing this stuff. I knew I was breaking all the rules with this story, and just wrote to please my own preferences. I wouldn't have had Elastigirl eat Beast Boy if he was her real biological son; but she did look great expanding in the Teen Titans Season 5 episode 1 cartoon and I just couldnt help myself.
I took license with WW and Talia too, although some Wonder Woman writers (like the 70s TV show writers) mentioned Wonder Woman knowing ancient people (Socrates, I think).
Very little of what I've written is in character. WW would never have eaten Atom, but the cartoon imagery made me want to write it.