Reviewer: IamtheWalrus Signed
Date: February 01 2018
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Hey buddy! Its so good to finally see this story be updated! I'vew been looking forward to this. Also, thanks for the shout out to my story! That really made my day to see. :) Anyway, onto the chapter itself.
This starts out on a good place with Zeke's nightmare. The hotness of the early part clashes nicely with the horror of the later part. I may have mentioned this before but I also enjoy that you are exploring the toll that Bev's nature plays on Zeke, as well as Bev really loving Zeke. It adds some nice depth where they easily couldn't have been any.
Moving on, let's talk about Anika and Mildred. It appears that they may be leaving this story soon. I have mixed feelings on that. On the one hand, it would be the best option for them. But on the other, I kinda like them suffering at the hands of Tiffany and Sophie because its hot! lol. I'll just have to wait and see how things go at the meeting.
On a side note, if Anika and Tiffany are taken out of the story, I would like to offer a suggestioin that I know likely won't be used. lol. Here it is anyway. What if as a way to help slate Tiffany's desire to kill and domiate tinies, Thomas asks Gwen how she found Trisha so Tiffany can find a petist who would willingly be owned by them? And of course, if you did this, the tiny woman in question should be a lesbain, so Tiffany wouldn't get worried that the new little lady might steal Thomas away. Let me know what you think of this idea. Like I said, I'm all but ceratin that this won't be used in anyway! lol
Also, I was a little shocked to see Tiffanty actually kiss Thomas. Has she done that before? And does that mean that her feelings for Thomas are developing more maturely?
The copcept of the giantesses basically copying tiny culture for their own is interesting. I like it! lol
But as you shouldn't be shocked to learn, the scene with Gwen and Trisha was my favorite! I LOVE those two! Also, I like how Gwen was lusting after the Indian cuties! Gwen's mentality in general is my favorite in this story, kind and humane but unthinking and treating tinies like beloved objects or pets. I always hope there is more of them in this story, and I eagerly await the arrival of Gwen's birthday party.
This chapter was a delight and I hope you keep up the good work! :)
Also, sorry about not reaching out to you in a while, I've been distracted too. Want to respond talking via email?
Author's Response: Glad to know the shout out made your day, man. :) Hopefully if you have the time or if you plan on continuing your story, we can see more of Anaya's amorous antics AND your other ideas ;)
Yeah, the affect Beverly is having on Zeke's mentality is very apparent. Let's just hope it turns out good for him. As for Anika and Mildred leaving, anything could happen.
Now there's an idea. Tiffany getting a petifist, (ideally a hot lesbian because hell yeah!) to cope with her tendencies sounds awesome. You know me too well, IamtheWalrus, how I don't usually use the sexy ideas (shame on me) you give me but who's to say I won't surprise you and everyone else. This idea of yours does give me an idea though so I might consider it.
I can't say Tiffany sees Thomas romantically. The way she kissed him could probably be compared to a little girl giving her puppy a kiss. I think one could say although Tiffany has some respect for Thomas, she still sees him as something that's hers like for example she picks him up without his permission sometimes.
How did I not know Gwen and Trisha were your favorite? ;p Gwen being at that age where she's just horny is probably why she's like that lol and soon we will see her birthday :D
We can talk via email whenever you like. Thanks for the review as always.