Penname: DX Machina [Contact] Real name: D.X. Machina
Member Since: February 21 2006
Membership status: Member
Bio:
D.X. Machina has been a part of the GTS community since 1994. He has written a number of works, including Change for a 22, A Few Strange Days, and Homo Sum. D.X. lives in Minnesota.
Beta-reader: Yes
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Reviews by DX Machina
Planar Shift by NFalc Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A scientist finds a way of communicating with a woman from another world. He transports himself to her world without her knowledge, the only catch being that everything in her world is on a far larger scale... But that's just the tip of the iceberg.


Categories: Adventure, Crush, Gentle, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50405 Read Count: 206264
[Report This] Published: February 17 2006 Updated: February 18 2006
Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 02 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A truly wonderful read, more than anything for wonderful characterization. (Don't worry, there's "good stuff" too.) It also features a plot that doesn't cop out. I appreciate that.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, DX. Having one of the most respected authors in GTS fiction write about one of my stories is still an honor.

Man or Mouse by Aaron Daly Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A col. mission goes arwy when he ends up shrunk and forced to try to seek out help from a giant world.


Categories: Adventure, Young Adult 20-29, Body Exploration, Humiliation, Instant Size Change, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: F/m
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14384 Read Count: 10357
[Report This] Published: February 22 2006 Updated: February 22 2006
Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 24 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

One of the early classics of the voyeur/unaware genre.  Not much "hardcore" stuff, but more than enough story.

Summary:

When a lovable park ranger his female teacher friend are shrunk to one inch by an ancient potion, they are rescued and taken home by beautiful 18 year old Stephanie. The tiny ranger and teacher learn about life and love on the tiny side at Stephanie's precious feet.  Joe takes Stephanie and Sarah the teacher on a wild adventure in his quest to return to normal size.


Categories: Teenager (13-19), Adventure, Body Exploration, Adult 30-39, Feet, Gentle
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24757 Read Count: 33430
[Report This] Published: May 07 2006 Updated: March 07 2012
Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starhalf-star
Date: May 07 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The Voodoo Cheeseburger

I'm sorry, this might be a good story, but I just couldn't quite get over the lack of paragraphs and grammar issues.

Author's Response: Thank you for your input, DX Machina. I now have edited my story into paragraphs and cleaned up a few other things I missed. Please give \"Joe\'s Tiny Adventures\" another try before you jettison it to the trash heap of history.

All I Ask by Atkins Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Join preston in the adventure of a lifetime as he crushes on his best friend mandy who doesnt know he likes her, but then he shrinks one day by a potion in a coffee shop and everything changes. Mandy's roommate and lesbian lover doesn't like the idea of preston hounding in on her territory
Categories: Body Exploration, Adventure, Unaware, Humiliation, Lesbians
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30312 Read Count: 32855
[Report This] Published: June 28 2006 Updated: June 28 2006
Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The sine qua non of the unaware genre; one of the top five macrophile stories, period. An absolute must-read.

Just Typical by trekg13 Rated: X starstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Just another typical day. Hank was a writer that let stories get the better of him. Involving interaction with his wife's best friend. Shrinking, couple sex, unaware. This story does contain a brief, vague descript toilet scene and some language
Categories: Couples , Humiliation, Toilet, Insertion, Insertion, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3216 Read Count: 18765
[Report This] Published: June 29 2006 Updated: June 29 2006
Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 05 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

An entertaining yarn, especially for those of us who have written early stories similar to those referenced here. I'd hate to get stuck in some of my early stuff. Then again, there are a few that might just be interesting....

Missing by nostromo Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary: A man shrinks to a very small size during his sleep. His wife is looking for him.
Categories: Body Exploration, Crush, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16918 Read Count: 73934
[Report This] Published: October 29 2006 Updated: December 20 2006
Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Extremely good, superbly executed, brilliant ending.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and commenting, DX!

Summary: The first born always has it a little bit easier then the rest, but easy street ends for Jacen when he finds himself shrinking do to a electrical surge. He now finds himself a inch tall and forced to seek out help from his siblings.
Categories: Teenager (13-19), Instant Size Change, Feet, Entrapment, Humiliation, Slave, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28014 Read Count: 324099
[Report This] Published: December 20 2006 Updated: December 03 2007
Reviewer: DX Machina Signed
Date: January 18 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: You are your own worst enemy

Interesting twist...looking forward to more.


Author's Response: wow, thanks DX The fact you are even reading this story is an honor to me. Your one of the reasons i even started writing anything. I never enjoyed writing until i read some of your stories.

Reviewer: DX Machina Signed
Date: February 06 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: You are your own worst enemy

See, I had a feeling there was a good explanation...

Summary:

On June 7, 2008, the Forest Lake High School of San Pequeno, CA disappeared without a trace.  A four-year investigation proved inconclusive.  Of the estimated three hundred students and faculty present that day, none were found.

This is their story.


Categories: Crush, Teenager (13-19), Adult 30-39, Adventure, Gentle, Violent, Vore, Unaware, Mouth Play, Feet, Insertion, Humiliation
Characters: None
Growth: Giant (31 ft. to 50 ft.), Mini GTS (16-30ft)
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45340 Read Count: 213714
[Report This] Published: January 19 2007 Updated: June 24 2009
Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30 2007 Title: Chapter 6: 9:30

Nice addition as per usual.  Look forward to more....

Author's Response: Thanks DX.  More is coming, hopefully at smaller intervals.  The whole "write one chapter every two months" thing isn't good for my karma.

Reviewer: DX Machina Signed
Date: January 20 2007 Title: Chapter 1: 7:00

Too much action, not enough dialogue!  :P

(It's a good thing he didn't read my latest....)



Author's Response:

It struck me as a rather cretinous comment as well.

Your latest is excellent, however, "too much dialogue" or not.  Thanks for the support, DX.

Reviewer: DX Machina Signed
Date: January 19 2007 Title: Chapter 1: 7:00

Came across this on your site today, so far so good--I think this should be fun.

Summary:

Faeries, pixies, and various little people swap stories in a multi-sized tavern staffed by human women. An ongoing series of short stories.


Categories: Fantasy, Giantess, Adventure, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Gentle, Humiliation, Mouth Play, Vore
Characters: None
Growth: Brobdnignagian (51 ft. to 100 ft.)
Shrink: Dwarf (3 ft. to 5 ft.), Lilliputian (6 in. to 3 in.), Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.), Munchkin (2.9 ft. to 1 ft.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33 Read Count: 59768
[Report This] Published: April 30 2007 Updated: June 07 2015
Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 27 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm really enjoying this. Nothing like a good old-fashioned tale-swap anthology.

Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17 2011 Title: The Green Goddess Inn

A very nice addition to a very enjoyable anthology.

Summary: The dreams of two strangers become intertwined, and what begins as a friendship turns into a fight for survival.
Categories: Instant Size Change, Adult 30-39, Crush, Gentle, Violent
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7660 Read Count: 21142
[Report This] Published: July 29 2007 Updated: February 02 2008
Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 29 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Meeting

Very intriguing beginning.  Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm pleased that you like it so far!

MISS Bloom by not really Rated: PG starhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A FETISH AT SCHOOL GOES WRONG WHEN YOU GET SHRUNK AND NOBODY KNOWS EXCEPT YOUR EVIL TEACHER.


Categories: Unaware, Instant Size Change, Crush, Teenager (13-19), Slave
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 611 Read Count: 10103
[Report This] Published: October 05 2007 Updated: October 05 2007
Reviewer: DX Machina Signed half-star
Date: October 05 2007 Title: Chapter 1: MRS BLOOM

STOP SHOUTING AT US.  It's not a good way to get your message across.

You have some ideas that might be good, if developed.  Slow down and develop them.  Also, commas are helpful to the reader.

Into The Wild by nostromo Rated: X starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Camping with your girlfriend is nice enough, camping with your giant girlfriend is a different experience altogether.

 


Categories: Insertion, Unaware, Body Exploration, Mouth Play, Butt
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: None
Size Roles: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21879 Read Count: 81574
[Report This] Published: April 17 2008 Updated: August 20 2008
Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 07 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Full of win. Also full of fun, horesshoes, ranbows, and good cheer. One of my favorites.

Author's Response: thank you so much for reading, DX! I will try to keep it interesting!

Summary:

Something was wrong I awoke with a start, where the hell was I? This was not my room in Dallas with the pictures hanging crooked on the wall. This was not my bed with the overpriced sheets. This place was strange, dark and cold.


Categories: Vore, Young Adult 20-29, Teenager (13-19), Instant Size Change, Adventure, Feet, Mouth Play
Characters: None
Growth: Giga (1 mi. to 100 mi.), Amazon (7 ft. to 15 ft.)
Shrink: Micro (1 in. to 1/2 in.), Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6116 Read Count: 161396
[Report This] Published: June 25 2008 Updated: January 21 2010
Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 25 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Awake In A Nightmare

Nice beginning, although you do have a formatting program in part two. Nevertheless, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Yea I know there was something from when I copied and pasted from microsoft word that caused everything after a certain point to be italicized I tried to fix it but no luck.

Summary: A college student is working in a hotel, just trying to get by when he finds his world turned upside when he is suddenly shrunk unknowingly by a guest.
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Teenager (13-19), Instant Size Change, Adventure, Body Exploration, Entrapment, Humiliation, Unaware
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: DigiDowner Universe
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10282 Read Count: 74979
[Report This] Published: June 27 2008 Updated: June 27 2008
Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 30 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent work, however it seems like it's missing narrative between chapter 1 and 2. Still, enjoyable as all get-out.

Author's Response:

I actually did that intentionally as the reader isn't suppose to know about the trials and tribulations he went through over that course of time. You actually learn more about them in second story that i'm writing, however I'm finishing up a few other projects while writing it so i'm unsure when it will be completed.

However, i did go back and add a little bit more of a transition. I orginally had a much longer transition that i felt told a bit too much and lead the reader by the hand a little a bit too much. 

 Anyway, glad you enjoyed it nonetheless.

Reviewer: DX Machina Signed
Date: December 14 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So are you ever gonna continue this? Because, you know, you should... :)

Kerry, My Owner by rodent Rated: R starhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary: I am shrunk down to 3 inches tall and used as a pet for Kerry
Categories: Young Adult 20-29, Insertion
Characters: None
Growth: None
Shrink: Minikin (3 in. to 1 in.)
Size Roles: None
Warnings: Following story may contain inappropriate material for certain audiences, This story is for entertainment purposes only.
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 750 Read Count: 20956
[Report This] Published: July 02 2008 Updated: July 02 2008
Reviewer: DX Machina Signed starhalf-star
Date: July 03 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: my story

Way short right now. Interesting stuff, but about 1/5 of an actual chapter. Don't give up or anything, but do try to develop a bit more before posting.