I loved this so much

I had a review before where I said that I thought that June deserved most of what was coming to her. By the end though, she's definitely had enough torture, and I started feeling bad for her. 

Doesn't help that my sister is a teacher, so I had some hesitations before reading this. 

But regardless, it is well written. And I got review #69, so that's neat :)

Though besides *SPOILERS FOR LITTLE BLACKMAIL 5* her being mentioned, does June Young appear in anything else you've written? Because as it stands, her story ends in a pretty anticlimactic way

Very nice work 

Another awesome story, well done!

Considering how much this story made my blood boil, I can only assume that is the mark of good satire. And even things that could be considered insensical actually bolster the strength of this satire. I strongly doubt that a man could impregnate a woman at a few inches tall, so unless they kept "Breeders" at normal size (which I doubt they would. 20 million males, even spread out and likely locked up, would probably lead to an uprising) or miraculously discovered a way to synthesize male semen, bye bye human race. There's plenty of other aspects, like how there would definitely be women sympathetic to men, there's nothing saying that women can't be shrunk too so depending on what happened to those sympathetic women people might wonder where the line is drawn, etc., but I'm sure that would distract from the story's focus. And I'm assuming this is mainly being played for laughs, so it's foolish to expect flawless character writing.

Overall, great satire, wouldn't read again, 10/10

Okay. While I think this story is impeccably written like all of your stories, I feel like this one has a crucial flaw: the worldbuilding (and in a related fashion, George's backstory). I don't have enough of a suspension of disbelief to buy into the idea that people would so quickly start selling tiny people like pets and treating them worse than actual pets like cats and dogs. I could see a black market happening, but with rich tinies still having a somewhat normal life, I find it hard to imagine that tinies in general wouldn't be looked after in some capacity. Speaking of which, I would assume George has family, so why wouldn't one of them look after him? And even if he didn't, how did he end up in the alley? To be honest, I feel like this story would have benefited from less backstory in general, since in that case I would likely feel less inclined to sympathize with George. 

All of this combined made me absolutely despise Laura's treatment of him. Sure, whenever you're training a dog for example, you've gotta be unfair sometimes so they know to do/not to do something, but she was beyond excessive.

I do like how you addressed the fact that it's probably Stockholm Syndrome that made him love her. I also like how Sarah actually had a conscience and treated him somewhat like a human, but getting to that point was almost unbearable for me.

However, I see how many other people like this story, so most of this is probably just personal preference on my part. After stories like this and the Yield stories on DA, I'm realizing that while I'm probably fine with cruelty, I can't stand injustice, especially in regards to people being stripped of their humanity.

So this was really just a long-winded way to say that I love your work, but this story wasn't for me. 

Very hot~

This story was so absolutely heartwarming and lovely, thank you so much for writing it!

Very lewd, 10/10

What a cute little story~