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Reviewer: Loralye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2019 3:29 AM Title: Grim News

Bravo, simply bravo!
I was thoroughly enjoying this story! I was so sad to be at the end already. I just love the interactions you have with Thalia and Eliza. Simple and detailed and sweet. A part 2 to this would be super rad, like her adjusting her height to various sizes for the fun of it and exploring the different kinks Eliza may have! Either way, this story was a true diamond! Been looking for a solid story for a while and This was it. Seriously though, well written and happily adding it to my favorites.

Reviewer: Ugly one Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2019 7:46 AM Title: Grim News

Great Story, maybe a part two after the wedding?



Author's Response:

Thanks. No plan for that yet, but if I have a good idea for it, I'd definitely give it a shot.

Reviewer: Saturn Knight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2019 1:46 PM Title: Epilogue

A delightful story. Wished it went on a little longer, but that's only because I really enjoyed reading it. Hope you write more.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I don't feel comfortable writing long stories yet, but I'm working my way there slowly.

Reviewer: BigAndLetBye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2019 12:34 AM Title: Grim News

I made an account for the express purpose of reviewing this purpose because I think it's criminal that it's at three and a half stars. I've seen stories on this website that lack any proper grammar, character elaboration, or barebone structure that are given five star reviews because they're loaded with smut. This story is only a few chapters in and has already become one of my favorites on the site. It's created an intimate and personal relationship between two characters that is built on trust and, potentially, love before one of those characters is enlarged (or shrunken, in other stories), and I gotta say, I'm an absolute slut for love and affection. And yet, it still incorporates some of that sexual content that people often come to sites like this for. Last but not least, you're building a world that is actually interesting and engaging to me, with everything from apparent fantasy racism to monarchical politics to even just a specific greeting, "Ehi." I normally do not like fantasy erotica because the worldbuilding tends to distract from the main focus, but in this story, that worldbuilding does nothing but enrich it. And goddamn, you've done this all in only a couple short chapters!! I saw on your profile that a lot of your stories tend to end after only two or three, and I hope that this story either does go on a bit longer, or—and this one might be fun—you can write more stories that take part in this world and follow some of these characters.

All in all, the only reason I don't think this story is my favorite on the website is because I can tell there's so much more to come. Kudos. And for any readers who are looking for another story that emphasizes interpersonal relationships on a level that is at least partly emotional, I highly recommend "We Fall Together." Both of these stories are ones that I want to keep reading regardless of whether I'm turned on (as opposed to other straight-smut stories that I feel pretty instantly disgusted with myself for engaging in).



Author's Response:

Oh wow. Well thanks, I really appreciate the compliments. Althoguh I do have to confess that the fantasy greeting was not a planned feature: I am not a native english speaker, "Ehi" is just an informal gretting in my language. Terribly sorry for the confusion, I thought for some reason that it was an international ... sound.

Anyway, thanks again. And I do too love "We Fall Together", I am quite proud to be compared to that one.

Reviewer: msad99 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 19 2019 9:31 AM Title: The Tear

Great story.

Looking forward to its next edition.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Hopefully it will be pretty soon. The next part is already halfway done.

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