Date: July 06 2023 12:19 AM Title: After school fun
I have read your stories since you began uploading them here and believe that your writing has improved steadily, chapter to chapter. You were initially sparse yet precise-- which is to say that you weren't wasting time.
Since then you have managed to expand without adding fat. There are areas that *might* need tightening but I trust that they will resolve and improve organically.
Basically: I pretty much love everything you write.
Taking the author's note in the most recent chapter at face value (which is to say that it's not a rhetorical request for suggestion) I feel that, for Alex, the wife as a sex toy works perfectly, but not out of lust but humiliation and apathy. Back rather than front-- or both but it's the bullying she's getting off on, not the literal physical stimulation.
But this isn't to try to direct you, it's bound to be fun no matter what direction you go.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for such a thoughtful review, I’m glad to hear I’ve been improving. I often feel like I’m being too detailed and cut out a lot during editing, I may begin to leave more in and see what everyone thinks.
The author’s note certainly wasn’t rhetorical, I was genuinely hoping to hear what people thought of the idea so thank you. You hit the nail on the head for my intention with Alex and the wife. I see this as a way for Alex to show off her power over both the wife and husband. I was more worried people would think it seemed unfitting for the story or poorly planned, so, I’m glad to hear you like the premise.
Thank you again for the review, they keep me writing. I’d love to hear more of your thoughts in future reviews, or if you have suggestions/requests for the story please message me on Discord, it should be in my bio.
[Report This]Date: June 14 2023 6:31 PM Title: After school fun
This story is really amazing, I really enjoy Alex character, I wonder if you are gonna do a growth/giantess story with a tomboy like Alex one day. Anyways, keep going I hope Alex have the chance to get more toy for her.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I have yet to write a growth story but it could be fun! Maybe that one will be next after i get through my current queue :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I have yet to write a growth story but it could be fun! Maybe that one will be next after i get through my current queue :)
[Report This]Date: June 10 2023 7:49 AM Title: After school fun
Nice story, Alex really knows how to bully him haha.
Hoping she finds several tinies to bully too.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! Just noticed i never responded, sorry! Hope you’re pleased with the new toys she’s found in recent chapters :)
[Report This]Date: June 10 2023 7:49 AM Title: After school fun
Nice story, Alex really knows how to bully him haha.
Hoping she finds several tinies to bully too.
Author's Response:
She'll be getting some new toys in a future chapter! Thanks for the review, means a lot!
[Report This]Date: June 09 2023 7:33 AM Title: After school fun
Thanks for always responding! Thank you also for clarifying I figured it meant he died I just didn’t want to fully believe it as I wanted the torture to continue lol. I look forward to the ending and your next story as always! You like what I like in stories and for that I’m appreciative!
Author's Response:
Of course! And don’t worry, Alex is fun to write and there are still plenty of other tinies in the school right? Not sure how i will continue the story yet but I had even considered her finding Jake’s parents so she could have more fun. If you have any ideas for stories you’d like to see hit me up, would be glad to write one for you! As always thanks for interacting
Author's Response:
Of course! And don’t worry, Alex is fun to write and there are still plenty of other tinies in the school right? Not sure how i will continue the story yet but I had even considered her finding Jake’s parents so she could have more fun. If you have any ideas for stories you’d like to see hit me up, would be glad to write one for you! As always thanks for interacting
Author's Response:
Of course! And don’t worry, Alex is fun to write and there are still plenty of other tinies in the school right? Not sure how i will continue the story yet but I had even considered her finding Jake’s parents so she could have more fun. If you have any ideas for stories you’d like to see hit me up, would be glad to write one for you! As always thanks for interacting
[Report This]Date: June 01 2023 11:12 PM Title: After school fun
Dude this is awesome! Alex is amazing giantess and her attitude is intoxicating
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review, means a lot! Tomboys are always the best :)
[Report This]Date: May 31 2023 11:12 AM Title: After school fun
Is he going to get injured or crushed in the shoe?
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'm working on the next chapter but lets just say he will certainly not enjoy his time in the shoe!
[Report This]Date: May 31 2023 12:33 AM Title: After school fun
Giant Tomboys always deserve our love and worship.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Tomboys are my personal favorite I have to admit :)
Date: May 30 2023 3:38 PM Title: After school fun
Loving it so far! I'm excited for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for another review, it really means a lot. Hoping to have this story wrapped up by the end of the week!