Reviews For Shrunk At School
Reviewer: DX Machina Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2009 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 Kicking Things Off
Date: October 23 2009 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 Kicking Things Off
It's well-done, but a bit choppy -- each chapter reads more like part of a choose-your-own-adventure story than a full-blown chapter. You've got a good plot, and your ideas are intriguing; take some time and expand them a bit, and you'll really have something.
Reviewer: VoyuerFan Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2009 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 Kicking Things Off
Date: October 20 2009 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 Kicking Things Off
yeah no biggy thoug