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Reviewer: klyk78 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2023 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 4

Great story.

But I think something happened when you posted chapter 4 as it repeats itself in the middle of the chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback and for identifying that issue, I've corrected Part 4 now.

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