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Date: December 04 2018 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 12

It could've been worse, Paul. They could've been playing water polo...with you Scotch-taped to the ball!

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Date: May 11 2010 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh, brother! He's in for it, now!

Unless, that is, Naomi completely understands that it wasn't _his_ fault in bowling her over.

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Date: April 05 2010 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 10

Hmmmmmm! Why do I suddenly have a vision of beach volleyball suddenly turning into "Keep-away" (aka "Monkey In The Middle")?

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Date: April 05 2010 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 9

Talk about feeling belittled!

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Date: December 01 2009 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh, this is "gothing" to be good.*

*Sorry! Couldn't resist.

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2009 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

great narrative! wish it was more than just PG!

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Date: November 21 2009 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 7

Well, at least he didn't have to go through some humiliating kissing scene.

I wonder what'll happen to him during gym?

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Date: November 10 2009 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 6

Uh-oh! I wonder who's going to read the male lead? ;-D

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Date: November 06 2009 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 4

Yeah! What Paul might be able to slap his insensitive relatives with, if he were a real-world little person.

Of course, this being your story, this possible solution will be completely unavailable to him, I'm sure. ;-)

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Date: November 06 2009 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 5

Well, at least his homeroom teacher is being half-way decent.

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Date: November 06 2009 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

"Can you say, 'lawsuit?' "

Author's Response: lawsuit?

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Date: November 06 2009 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 4

I can see Paul's point of view. In the real world, a middle-aged "little man" wouldn't like that kind of treatment from his full-sized wife, and he'd be right to feel that way. And, if the situation were reversed, a full-sized husband would be twice as unlikely to get away with that b.s., re: his half-sized wife!

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Date: November 05 2009 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 3

OK! I'm sufficiently hooked. I'll be here, for chapter 4.

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Date: November 05 2009 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 2

So far/so good. As for Becky? She sounds like a closet lesbian with a crush on Ronnie, and thereby jealous of Ronnie's friendship with Our Hero.

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