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Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2024 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story! I would love to see him end up in one of their butts at some point. Maybe he isn't too small for that

Reviewer: Musukaiser Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2024 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really liking this so far, and for your first time writing here this is great 

Reviewer: FauxLily Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2024 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

As Someone with an imagination that can bring words to life, it is not hard to picture and make this story come to life and plausible. I become more and more interested with Tom, his perspective on what is normal to everyone else and what he remembers his life to be, if he can get to his old life... Does he want his old life back?

I love the descriptions and how you have taken the time to describe and make us feel what Tom is feeling, the Scents and Sensations… The Care and thoughtfulness to describe every feeling, the intense burning of wanting to give in your desire but ignore his Fight or Flight response.

Jane uses Tom as a weapon against himself. The Emasculation, Humiliation and downplay of his feelings. She chose him purely based on the how much control she could have, (from the way she locked him out the room, to making him understand that the Dildo served her better,  although he truly loves her and would attempt to give her anything.

Although Jess may have hidden feelings for Tom, she still uses his size against him to have her way. Which would make Tom  (although scared in the beginning) more than willing to shed the Emasculation and to prove his strength and Desire, although being tall enough to walk through the heels (adds to the seductiveness of the story, as heels are quite a head turner in general... Well done 😊)


Keep writing, and Im sure we will keep reading.. 😉



Author's Response:

Hello FauxLily, thank you for taking the time to read and review. You hit the nail on the head with Jess especially, but there may be some bombshells! Still alot of writing to go! 😁

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2024 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow so far a great story dude keep up the great work 



Author's Response:

Hey J-Vader, thanks for the great feedback, more chapters coming soon. 

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