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Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2010 8:38 PM Title: The suprise

Nice story. You're doing a fantasic job for your first story.

I'm gonna take a guess here; the thing that dropped.. was it a piece of paper? I'm probably wrong. Hah.



Author's Response: Off.....MUCH bigger....I am having a little writers block...but should have more up soon!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2010 10:25 AM Title: The suprise

I just read the first four chapters in one sitting. Not bad. Almost worthy of Stan Williams!

I especially loved chapter 3. I was reminded of the bicycle and shower scenes from the low-budget video classic, "Getting Lucky." ;-D

Author's Response: I am glad you liked it...I am actually thinking of writing a fantasy novel....not so much about giantess' though.

Reviewer: gamergasteiz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2010 10:53 AM Title: chapter 1: Introduction

Very remarkable job. Are you sure is your first story? Very erotic. Please, continue and show us your writter potential! Thanks.



Author's Response: Yes this is my first story...actually, the first piece of literature I have ever written longer than a few sentences. This website brought forth something I had a passion for, and no other story caught me into the story line itself. I was hoping that this would catch someone's attention...I will be adding 2 more chapters, at least, by the end of 1/15/2010

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