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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 6: Looking up at the Landlady

Sorry I haven't reviewed this story yet... Because its very good, and light-hearted. Really anticipating where you take this tale. I kinda agree with Cary bout the landlady as far as just walking in but from experience that is a very realistic reaction for her to have, well done. Can't wait to see where you take this tale.

Aaron

Ps hope there is more of the landlady in future chapters.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 6: Looking up at the Landlady

She could easily have reminded him of Rent Day the day beforehand! I think she just wanted to see why he had suddenly become a recluse. But, still, she could have just called and left a message (assuming he has a cellphone w/voicemail capability). Letting herself in with her key? Even for a landlady, that's borderline invasion of privacy!

Author's Response: Well...let's just say that she's a nosy parker and with the whole invasion of privacy; that's a plot device later on for when Scott's little and home alone.

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