Reviews For A special day
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Reviewer: Ringmaster Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 20 2006 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 4

It is a fine story you tell, Nostromo. I relish a story inwhich a wee man has a grand adventure, beats the odds, and finds true love in the end.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot, Ringmaster! I was fond of the couple of the first chapter, and felt compelled to save the day for them! :-)thanks a gain for reading!

Reviewer: Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2006 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 4

As I said before, a very gripping story.
Excellent. And your grammar is improving. I was only sad to see it end.
I liked the scene where Helen swallows him, and then he wakes from a dream. A good surprise.

Author's Response: thanks , Stan, i was sad myself to finish it. But really there was no other way. Had I started another thread (escape + revenge for instance), i would have lost the plot i think.

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