Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2010 1:36 AM Title: Pages (64-80) / 403

I toggled the rating option under the review rectangle. Is that the right way to give a five star rating.
The satire of giantessworld is a great plot device and makes it more real.
Also I like the calling to Troy after he's eaten, and him calling back.

Author's Response: Heh, the rating goes from 1-10 and the number is divided by two and thats the star value, so rate 10 if you want 5 stars. :D
I tried to make this story good, and I've certainly tried to make it better with this more recent draft! However it was never as it was meant to be, but all things do develope on their own.
And I agree, I thought that piece was a neat little bit that you don't see quite often in these kinds of stories. Glad you enjoy it!
--TFK