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Reviewer: Ripley Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2011 11:07 PM Title: Pages (240-250) / 403

So far it's a good read.  It seems pretty similar to the story you had on here all those years ago.  I like the parts where Melanie plays with David best.

Author's Response:

Its the exact same story, just revised, rewritten in some places, and completely edited. :D And personally, those are my favourite parts too. :) Thank you for the review

--TFK

Reviewer: tim31122004 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2011 9:24 AM Title: Pages (240-250) / 403

I am confused. What is the status of TROM in the deviantart account of dmoose ?

Author's Response:

You know, I'm not quite sure anymore. I don't understand deviantart and I'm not quite sure I like it. If anything, that is Draft 4 and what I am posting here is Draft 4.5, so this one is newer. I originally thought TRoM on Deviatart was fully uploaded, but I could be mistaken. I haven't logged into that account in forever. But, it's my account and still my story. I just don't remember at the moment where I put that whole bit. Anything to get the word out before I release the 'next big thing'. :D

--TFK

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