[Report This]Date: March 02 2023 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice little erotic tale about a new world order where males are commonly shrunk down for eating, work and for pleasing women in other ways. I liked the character of Brooke and found this creation interesting. I've read the other portions of the story, including The Women's Republic, and I think there is some good plot that could be fleshed out. It would make for a nice continuing series, should the author return to it.
Date: July 20 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really well put together story. Given Jane's clearly feminist view of men, it's hard to tell whether the author is male or female.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! I am a male haha. Glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: May 24 2011 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
THis is an outstanding story. I look forward to Brook and Kym trying out vore. I do hope it will be soon.
Date: March 22 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really really liked this one. Please continue.
Date: March 18 2011 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice world you describe ! Hope it will grow with your story.
Date: February 25 2011 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
I know this isn't a review really, but you seemed to be asking for feedback in general. I definitely liked the story, and would like to see more if you are thinking of conitnuing it.
Author's Response: I appreciate the feedback! I'm definitely looking to write more, I know this story is a bit choppy at spots so I'm looking to build off it.