Date: August 23 2012 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Invidia
Well the last that was heard from the author was that he had class all day tomorrow.
Maybe Danielle's new form brought him to a abrupt and somewhat bitter-sweet end?
We can only wonder.....
[Report This]Date: August 28 2011 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Invidia
Great beginning.
Wonderful story scenario!
Looking forward to the continuation of this one.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the encouragement. Sorry I was a little late. (I'm taking 7 classes right now, so time's very tight.) I plan on updating it sometime either today or tomorrow.
Date: August 27 2011 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Invidia
Well this is interesting. I really like the story but it's hard to read because oyu haven't broken up the paragraphs effectivtly and there's huge and dauting. I think a good place to take this story would be that Danielle protects Neil and is gentle towards so long as he is friendly and well basically follows are her around, obviously doing a lot of what she wants since she said she's friendly towards people she likes.