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Reviewer: iki Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2012 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: Heading Down and Arrival

Any chance of a third chapter soon? Would be a shame to leave this story unfinished.

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: Heading Down and Arrival

Many thanks for your reply, Doorknob. So glad my comments did not disparage. Of course, the fantasy of being devoured by a female (or several) is so exciting whichever one desires - whether shrunk or full-sized. Both situations galvanises the libido - especially the frightful anticipation beforehand - that of awaiting one's gastronomic fate, and then that fearful moment upon being introduced to the beautiful mouth of the female predator.  Weird, yes, but so sexually stimulating.  Look forward to your next instalment, my friend.

Reviewer: iki Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 04 2012 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: Heading Down and Arrival

Great writing as usual, Doorknob. You really know how to keep things interesting. I like how the story takes a little turn with the Exhibition and the introduction of Rian. I did however miss some vore action, but i guess that's for part III.

It would be a shame if the next part became the final chapter. I really like the character of Brooke and i would love to see her go on more vore adventures. Maybe she can consume her next man together with some friends. her next victim can be some a little more innocent than the man she captured in part II. Just a suggestion. I like the idea of Brooke being merciless to a totally helpless and innocent man. Anyway, great work!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the input! Part 3 will have vore for sure. I was thinking of ending this chapter with vore but didn't want to rush it in at the end.

Reviewer: girlfood Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Heading Down and Arrival

Fantastic writing a great detail. Doorknob you do a great job of painting the picture for a reader and what a picture it is! Well done. I look forward to more!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the story girlfood! It's probably my favourite addition so far, hopefully I can get the next (probably final) chapter up soon. 

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