Wel, doorknob, I found this 3-part yarn extremely interesting and well-written. Could not fault it except that it doesn't really excite one. I would have put more detail in the description of the female characters - the three girls and the staff of the Exhibition. As well, I always find it hard to accept the minimised victims at only one inch. Such a morsal could hardly be felt by the diner as it descends down her gullet, let alone "fill" her stomach.  However, as you have said, and I, 'everyone to their own.'    Don't let my remarks discourage you. In time, perhaps you'll improve and take heed of what I say.