Reviews For Powershift
Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 12:03 AM Title: The First to Go
Date: October 13 2015 12:03 AM Title: The First to Go
Or maybe he didn't want to save your life because he knew you were sleeping with another person?
Reviewer: femfeetlicker Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2012 9:07 AM Title: The First to Go
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Date: April 20 2012 9:07 AM Title: The First to Go
Going better, but I wish she crush people barefoot.
Author's Response:
I'm going to have more! I promise!
Reviewer: Aborigen Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2012 3:56 PM Title: The First to Go
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Date: March 18 2012 3:56 PM Title: The First to Go
You're very strong on dialogue. I like that you can create genuine conversations and that each of the characters sound consistent. Try not to form sentences with complicated, winding structure--just state what happens. If a sentence runs too long, think about breaking it up into two or three.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yea i've noticed i have that problem.....