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Reviewer: shrimp Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 06 2012 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 50 - Cindy's Tease

This is one of my favorite chapters... You put a lot of attention to details in this one and it is all in the details!

Great job.. Err except for the biting of the lip part.. It seems as if lip biting in the GTS qualifier these days.. Kind of like qaulifying a lab room by mentioning a bunsen burner on the table.. He. he...

Great chapter never the less!

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