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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2012 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 3: Getting there

There is some "info dumping" here and what this means is telling the author about things that haven't bee properly explained, such as AQD which I have no idea what it stands for. A good way to get around the problem is to have a prologue.

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