[Report This]Date: January 13 2013 10:41 AM Title: Meltdown
Story is getting good. Just hope that finally Madison an Liza get what's coming to them. Also wish Elise's eldest daughter is returned to her.
aaron
Date: January 13 2013 3:00 AM Title: Meltdown
I have a feeling Louise will change but I'm not sure. I can only hope she does.
Date: January 13 2013 12:51 AM Title: Lost and Found
One more thing, (looks around to see if anybody is watching and whispers) when he mentions Liza, to Louise and Elise, something big is going to happen because I'm PRETTY sure that Liza is (looks around again) related to them.
[Report This]Date: January 12 2013 5:12 PM Title: Meltdown
This is getting pretty awesome, man I love this story!
[Report This]Date: January 12 2013 5:10 PM Title: Meltdown
I don't know, but I think Franky just about won the fight with Louise! Good job man! Now he just needs to beat Maddison (and Liza.)
[Report This]Date: January 10 2013 8:07 PM Title: Lost and Found
Franky needs another meeting with Liza. This time they need to be on equal terms.
[Report This]Date: January 09 2013 4:49 PM Title: Silent Warfare
Franky can't die! He's going to get out of this somehow! That, or she's going to absolutely crush him.
I hope he doesn't die...
Date: January 09 2013 3:16 PM Title: Silent Warfare
What I want to know is how Maddison even found out where he was.
Author's Response:
Chapter's 7 and 8.
Date: January 09 2013 3:15 PM Title: Silent Warfare
Fukin Speak up Franky!! Tell the Damn Truth!!
[Report This]Date: January 09 2013 1:54 PM Title: Silent Warfare
Looks like Maddison is going to give Franky three female roommates. :-(
Author's Response:
Have a little faith in Franky. >;(
[Report This]Date: January 02 2013 11:53 PM Title: Morning Prep
ohhhhhhhhhh shit, u know what would be perfect, maddison getting punched in the FACE. now im scared for our little hero
Date: January 02 2013 11:56 AM Title: Morning Prep
Here:
I stared up to Elise's bright eyes who just kissed me.
It looks like the eyes are the ones doing the kssing.
The ending of the chapter made my heart beat a little faster. Good job.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2013 6:02 PM Title: Morning Prep
Kinda obvious this should happen. I can only imagine what comes next
[Report This]Date: December 22 2012 3:03 PM Title: Lost and Found
Late review.
But, I can't wait to see what you've got in store for Franky when Maddison (or Liza) find out he's still alive.
Such a huge fan of these stories!
Date: December 20 2012 4:04 PM Title: Mother Dearest
I'm still wondering why you had that chapter with the other characters from the old story. Something is going to happen soon isn't it?
Author's Response:
Yeah very soon, in the story tomorrow is going to be a very eventful day where things will start to really take off. The prior chapters mainly were to give the new characters some personality and chapter time with various antics. Chapter 7 was to mainly show that they still were around and will play a role in the story. If you want a bit of a spoiler *ALERT* I'm planning for it by chapter 13 depending on how my ideas flow or 14 at the latest.
[Report This]Date: December 20 2012 3:33 PM Title: Mother Dearest
Well, then, Merry Xmas and we'll see you next year!
P.S.---this was a nice tender way to end the old one. Bravo!
[Report This]Date: December 20 2012 3:30 PM Title: Franky's Hell
"Mommy???" Uh-oh!
[Report This]Date: December 17 2012 9:43 PM Title: Franky's Hell
Great story an chapter. Can't wait to see how this progresses.
aaron
Date: December 17 2012 4:08 PM Title: Lost and Found
Really like Elise, and I feel that if I was Franky, she would be the only thing keeping me from just killing myself.