You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2012 2:30 PM Title: Franky's Hell

Hopefully not too longer until the next chapter. I really liked the descriptive languaged you used in this chapter.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 14 2012 12:23 PM Title: R & R

A trained health professional, she might be. But, I still think that part of the physical was slightly more than scientific interest (lol)! As to your comment in the chapter notes? I hope so, too. But, for some reason, I doubt it.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2012 10:56 AM Title: R & R

Franky could be the child Elise has always wanted but never had, in a kind of metaphorical sense, because he is a bit too old to be an actual child. So what I mean is he will bring out her motherly side as what's her name is always unappreciative and/or grumpy so she will want to spend more time with him.

 



Author's Response:

Very exceptional observation, keep that in mind.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 10:07 AM Title: Lay and Prey

Franky's right: Crap rolls down hill.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 8:49 AM Title: Lay and Prey

I know there will be a happy ending and eventually Maddison will be brought to justice.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 11:40 PM Title: Lay and Prey

Wow really like Elsie hope that she can protect Franky from her own bratty daughter. Wonder if Franky with have the courage to tell Elsie how mean they've been. Also I loved to see more of Elsie's sister

aaron

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 11:26 PM Title: Lost and Found

 

heavy storm? more like a tidal wave full oh angry sharks

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 10:11 PM Title: Lay and Prey

 

really liked this ch but im scared to death for franky. srry but I don't think u like franky tht much, he has to deal with 2 bitches after 2 other crazy bitches tried to kill him. 

Their is no hope for our hero lol.



Author's Response:

I don't hate him, he just needs to weather a very heavy storm to reach some solace.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09 2012 9:43 PM Title: Lost and Found

I wonder who that scientist nut coming to check on Franky is? Seems a little... Mysterious...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2012 11:06 PM Title: Best Frenemies

Why didn't she listen, indeed!

Then, again: if she had, we wouldn't have received this nice little sequel as a Xmas gift! Now, would we?

;-)

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2012 4:02 PM Title: Best Frenemies

Why didn't Liza listen to him? I have an incling Liza is related to one or more of the new characters.

Reviewer: Gtsboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2012 8:46 PM Title: Lost and Found

I loved the first of the "Friend or Foe" series, and this one is turning out to be great as well! Many thanks for a great story! I was hoping, if you don't mind, putting in a part where Franky is begging for mercy from whoever is torturing him? That would be neat, but the choice is yours. Once again, thanks for a great story!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2012 12:12 PM Title: No Rest For The Weary

Good! Then, maybe we'll see whether or not my secondary suspicions are correct.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2012 3:28 AM Title: No Rest For The Weary

So Maddison and Liza will actually rescue him? I love spoilers and this one has got me thinking. Hopefully it won't be too long.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2012 11:41 PM Title: Soups On

This story is really good. It grabbed my attention big time when Elise said her eldest daughter was one of the missing, an I cannot wait to see how this story takes place. But if I may, I'd like to present an idea. IMO it would be really cool if she was shrunk an brought back to her very loving family(much like he was found) but I'm probably just getting ahead of myself with my presumptuous way of thinking but in the end it's your story.

aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2012 10:30 AM Title: Soups On

Yep! I was right. Now, I wonder if I'm right in predicting that the missing older daughter is L***?

;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2012 10:22 AM Title: Household Meeting

Wild guess: two female nuts are going to put Our Hero in the soup.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2012 6:54 AM Title: Soups On

I think Louise will turn out nice in the end. One can only hope.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2012 6:46 AM Title: Household Meeting

Wow, that's scary. I'm starting to see why you called the story what you did.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2012 6:37 PM Title: Soups On

 

hmmm missing sister. good ch.

You must login (register) to review.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.