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Reviewer: littlemac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2013 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 3

So good! Please keep up the great work!

Reviewer: gerald Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2013 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 3

Now wasn't this better? A bit of remorse plus consent and they already seem more like people with feelings rather than just porn-stars.

And the porn part is not bad - so keep it coming :>

Just two suggestions though (yes, never satisfied) - she shouldn't be able to "scoop him up" in both her hands if he is half inch tall and the "blowjob" wouldn't work either - not to mention that he will definitely need to work more on his own now :>

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