Date: August 23 2013 11:13 PM Title: Part 1: Downsizing
Hm i dont know what to say others than, i am confused by all those paragraphs. They may be an important part of the story concept in general but for me they are simply a trigger to stop reading, sorry.
I was really surprised by this after all those increadible stories you have posted here, like "changes happen", "tutoring" or Soroity Prank" which puts you on a very high spot in the meaning of writing skill here on this website.
Author's Response:
It's written in comic format
[Report This]Date: August 23 2013 8:25 AM Title: Part 1: Downsizing
Great, great, great!
While I was reading I thought one could ask for a custom video rather than a comic, but methinks six giant women is probably too much.
Oh... the printable version says this story is not complete btw!
Author's Response:
Thanks you very much sir!
And the reason it says the story is not yet complete is because it isn't. It's a two part story. The other part is already written though. I'll proofread it and upload it sometime next week.